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Dedicated To Lori - For Taylor

Over the course of the past four years of my life I have met a lot of wonderful women from all over the world connecting with them via the internet by sharing a common bond in life that will never dissolve. The bond between all of us is "loss of a child/grown adult child" and we have initiated a lifeline of friendship that we hope continues on for many many years.

This poem is officially dedicated to my dearest of friends Lori, who I've had the pleasure of meeting and who has taken the time to inspire this poem.

Landing Space

Tempting to live wildly within a lengthy trance listening to your favorite music but never getting up to dance.

So many matters come and go but we are never destined to know anything about how our lives will go.

Just as water forms shapes

of what it pours in to

we have been shaped to never escape a place in our lives we never would have made.

Copyright � August 2011 DZ


Comments 8 comments

LB 5 years ago


That you took the time to do this for me - that's awe-inspiring! Thank yu my dear friend. Now excuse me while I shed a few tears of happicness knowing someone out there cares.


lb 5 years ago


* happiness

Someday I will proofread BEFORE I hit enter...

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Denizee 5 years ago Author

Something from the heart is honestly my most inspiring writing - very happy to know you appreciated and yes - I care very, very much.

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Hello, hello, 5 years ago from London, UK

Thank you for your fascinating account of finding friends through the interenet.

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Denizee 5 years ago Author

Thank you Hello, Sorry for my delay in responding have they changed the alerts here for viewing comments after posting Hubs? Happy you enjoyed this.

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jesusmyjoy 4 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

very good sis

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Denizee 4 years ago Author

Thank you Jesusmyjoy,

Lori lost her 18 year old son to drowning six years ago. She is a dear friend to me and I was blessed to meet her.

Thank you for reading this short dedication of love to her for her son Taylor.

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jesusmyjoy 4 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

I'm so sorry to hear about this..I new she was having trouble.

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