Haiku II

The rose buds blooming

Our lust wildly consuming

Not a thorn in sight

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Winter wind chills me

My emotions still for now

Warm my heart again

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Misunderstood words

Spark moments of searing doubt

A love mistaken

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I melt from your stare

Your touch ignites my passion

Hot as summer sun

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His cries in the night

Reaching a pelting frenzy

Swept by destruction

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The poets last words

Of true love and desire

Sadly never found

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Her dark eyes

Led me up the stormy path

I have lost control

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The leaves of autumn

So gently kissing the ground

Your lips I have found


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The door gently closes

The reality so loud

Leaving me broken



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© VC Maas-April 2010


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Noble Mongoose 6 years ago

These are really good.


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tantrum 6 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

Loved this haikus. It's the kind of poetry I like best. To write and to read it.


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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

love it great poem thanks for read


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europewalker 6 years ago Author

Thanks Noble for stopping by!


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europewalker 6 years ago Author

Tantrum, your comments are always welcomed.


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europewalker 6 years ago Author

Voice, glad you enjoyed the poetry.


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hypnodude 6 years ago from Italy

Beautiful poetry, I like haikus too. :)


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DustinsMom 6 years ago from USA

Excellent work!


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jill of alltrades 6 years ago from Philippines

I love your poems! Really enjoyed them.


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europewalker 6 years ago Author

Thanks hypnodude,DustinsMom and jill of alltrades for taking the time to read my poetry.


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, this is really good. I never really knew what Haiku poetry was before. But now I understand. Thanks nell


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jennshealthstore 6 years ago from Florida

Great poem!


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Daniel J. Neumann 6 years ago from Harrisburg, Pa

Europe Walker,

My favorite haiku was:

"The leaves of autumn

So gently kissing the ground

Your lips I have found"

because it reminds me of nature loving nature. It's a self-love that we all can learn from. It's hard to distinguish between self-love and egotism, but here's the key difference. To self-actualize, we must discern God within us, the part of our soul that's pure, and how everyone, equally, share divine purpose. Narcissism is the delusion that one is superior to all others. The difference is clear: mutual, homogenous chaos or an imposed hierarchy.

I, for one, chose to see the beauty of chaos. At the end of the day, it isn't so disordered after all. But how the puzzles fit together won't be revealed until after we're dead.

That's my opinion anyway.... I hope I didn't go too off track.

Thanks for sharing this,

Dan

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