Pondering Thoughts on "Age" is just a number....

the perception of the word " OLD " getting younger everyday......
the perception of the word " OLD " getting younger everyday...... | Source

Changes they are a coming !!!!

As I sit here wondering what my future will be…

Boxing up all my memories, isn’t easy you see…..

I can only take one, as my new space is small…

But I guess I'm lucky to have any space at all…

I was told as a child, when Nana’s time came..

She was allowed to take more or less, of the same..

I look forward to making new friends in this new place of mine..

As the government makes the decisions as to when it's our time..

Marriage doesn’t exist….it’s a thing of the past..

Wanting children is a thought, that doesn’t really last…

The idea of owning a home you see, is not reality..

We can only have what we are allowed ...

As we are one of many faces in the crowd..

I will be leaving tomorrow on my quest…

Living out my life with the rest..

Society says people over FORTY are no longer of use...

The old and sickly ? No… that’s an excuse….

The perception of what's "old" is getting younger each day….

I only hope that in some way soon…this thought will go away..

And the future will become the past…as I just turned forty today !

PS..It has been reported " old age " starts earlier each generation..just ask someone under 30..

PS...I personally did not turn 40, but, I'm sure there's someone that did ! 21 comments

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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Ha Ha! And I turned 21! LOL

I have enjoyed my most endearing lasting relationships with distinguished "older" folks. I have always had a kinship - even as a small child preferring the company of my Nana. She passed at 101 and was still teaching me valuable lessons until her dying breath.

You need to come and visit us in Upstate New York. My 84 year old Mom is great friends with so many of my friends as well as my older siblings friends. I have also attended many of her friends get-togethers and I had a hard time keeping up with them!

Some of the younger crowd can hardly put together an english word let alone a complete sentence yet your artistic poetry is masterfully accomplished.

You are like a fine wine my friend - you get better with age.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

shinimgirisheyes.....I thought the poem was appropriate due to how society treats most of the elderly..even some families push them to the sidelines..useful only when they need something....thanks for the comparison of me to fine wine...I am drinking a glass right now...thanks for your comments...


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DRG Da Real Grinc 4 years ago from All over the USA

Lol @ comment. Nicely written. So deep.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

DRG..glad you enjoyed it..thank you for commenting..


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

The world has really changed.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

Mhatter99..according to my story the world has changed..but..we still have a shot at correcting the problems, to asure that it doesn't turn out this way... the perception of " old " is getting younger everyday, just ask anyone under 40....thanks for stopping by and commenting....


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Hehehe..and im always sweet 16. I once heard some people who used to say that the oldies would now resigned so the youngsters can take their place


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

kjforce, loved it, and I am, well, a bit over that. LOL We all need to keep enjoying life and seeking for that ultimate opportunity--


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

cherylone..seek out opportunity at any age..the older the better, just due to the fact we CAN !!!!!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

unknown spy.....the youngsters of the world will NEVER take our place..they may stand in line waiting ,but, WE can never be replaced...they'll go through the motions though...remember we oldsters are a special breed.... "OE"..oldsters extraordinare "

hehehehe..


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DDE 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Life is beautiful and one should experience life with many options


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Well I wanted to tell you Happy Birthday, just in case:) I know when I write poems, they are not always about me. This was an awesome heart felt poem. A lot of the values that you mentioned have been lost over the years. I was born in 83 and I still abide by such values. So important in a world that no longer values such things. I can completely understand this KJ. Hope you have a great weekend:) Deep, deep poetry!!


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida Author

DDE..thank you for your comment..yes we do have options....

thelyricwriter...born in 83 ? I have underwear older than you..thank you so much for your heartfelt comments..you understood my words and that makes me feel very proud...yes you have a great week-end also, my friend..


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ZipperConstantine 3 years ago from United States

I liked this poem very much. Respect is taught and the lack of it is handed down by generation to generation.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

ZipperConstantine..thanks for stopping by and commenting..your words ring true....


squazo76 3 years ago

Ill be 37 this year. Those are true words. Every one should ponder old age. That was a delight to read.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

squazo76....funny but it is a natural phenomena that at 20..40 is old...at 40..60 is old...after 60..old is DEAD....glad you enjoyed..thanks for stopping by...


Vickiw 3 years ago

I loved your poem; it was thoughtful and a little sad. I have very dear older friends, and admire them so much. I do believe age is a state of mind. As one of them ( a trim 86 year-old) said to me yesterday, "you just have to keep moving."Such wisdom. I don't think you would hear that from a younger person, anyone under 30!


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

Vickiw.. Thank you for stopping by and commenting..I too feel there are many over the age of 65 that could contribute to society, especially to the school system of today.... teachers today can use the extra help, as they are overwhelmed....have a great day and thanks for becoming a fan...


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PHILLYDREAMER 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

I definitely see the discrimination against older people happening. My old job did its best to push out the older people and they were placed with younger people who would work for less money. I think at some point you have to start becoming financially dependent on yourself and look to starting your own business.


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida Author

PHILLYDREAMER....I have seen more changes in the last ten years, than have taken place over 40 years span....yet many important things that should be better are the same or worse...."weird world "...eh ?

thanks for your thoughts....

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