Precious Moments (poem)

So precious were the moments which we set

Each dream a wondrous footprint in the sand

What memories were cast in lovers’ net

As stars forever strolled within our hand

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We walked the ways of ever’s golden mist

To fashion fruit which fell from magic’s tree

Such splendors surged from serenades we kissed

Our dances formed a new reality

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Beyond beyond was set our river’s flow

We were the light of meaning up ahead

A promise which would never let this go

And lighten every unknown tear we shed

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So here my life and reason pledge to stay

To make a precious moment of today

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Lovely memories expressed and passionate music.

Up and more and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Any moment can be special so well thought of


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

I'm feeling withdrawals from the limericks. If you are still writing them I'm not getting them. Oh well, this was again beautiful my friend.


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

I particularly like this one, Martin.

Simply complex with a music score to accompany the passion.

DJ.


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

Wow, a hub doesn't get more romantic than this. I love the beautiful video to go with it. Memories are so important to hold onto. Great write my friend.


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passionate77 3 years ago

ohhhhhh soooooooooooo lovely and heart touching words you shared mhatter dear, enjoyed a lot going all through this sweet poetic expression of special memories. blessings dear!


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MarleneB 3 years ago from Northern California, USA

Tender romance. Loved it!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Each day is filled with precious moments and it's up to us to use them in the right way. Such a beautiful poem.


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Amazing. There are just moments to live for.


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

A wonderful poem Martin. Voted up and shared.

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Life is so short, we need to make each day meaningful and precious. I great piece.


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Tuatha 3 years ago from Fayetteville, NC

It is a struggle at times, moving moment by moment, creating memories in rhyme, as what I choose to comment. Thanks Martin


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Yes, we must make the most of every moment. Very beautifully said.

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