Prettier Please


O violent wind carry the

To those stitched hearts seem's

Thy cold rain they beg for thee

They scream fall down upon me

Then your ending momentarily

Lightening we say to thee

Strike down upon we

Till patience is received

Chemicals that enhance

They beg for your release

Suffering beginning

And ending

Then beginning again.

Giving tree they beg

Give to them thy fruit

In exchange for nothing

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Entwinds 6 years ago

I love the use of words

My eyes absorbed the words.


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Deborah Demander 6 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

There is a lot of passion in this poem.


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Joy56 6 years ago


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prey 6 years ago from places you should hope we never meet

what about in exchange for me?

beautiful, truly moving

so proud to call u a friend

thank you for sharing another piece of art



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truster 6 years ago from A Bed of Roses

Interesting ;)

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kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago


beautiful as usual


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epigramman 6 years ago

it dosen't get any prettier than this - but then again as a poet you're 'awfully' good!

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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

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