Promised Song (poem)

Return to me those moments far away

Those glimpses of a far more founder dawn

Grand hopes and wishes dreams are built upon

Soft scented valley of a brighter day

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It seems the curtains of my soul are drawn

To diverse portions passing in life’s play

Confusion holds me captive in its sway

I fear that one which once was me is gone

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Returning shadows whispering so long

A yearning churning causes heart to sting

While burning doubt casts blindness to my sight

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Then in the wind returns a promised song

Refreshing water of eternal spring

She takes my hand and kisses me goodnight

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web923 3 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

This was wonderful and a real joy to read. Awesome!


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shara63 3 years ago from Delhi

Returning shadows whispering so long...A yearning churning causes heart to sting..... so rejoicing & I loved it !


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Brilliantly done ! A delight to read as always. Votes up and sharing too.


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Where there is love, there is hope. Up and beautiful.


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Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

I have to agree with Breakfastpop who said it so well..."where there is love, there is hope." Voted up ++. :-)


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And once again, you are safe. Great work, Martin.


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eHealer 3 years ago from Las Vegas

Beautiful Mhatter! Just awesome! You have been booked and pinned!


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Michele Travis 3 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Excellent again of course. Beautiful.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Another beautiful one..Awesome...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Romantically wonderful!


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Return to me those moments far away

Those glimpses of a far more founder dawn

Grand hopes and wishes dreams are built upon

Soft scented valley of a brighter day

I love this poem Martin and especially the words above. Here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here. Have a great day.

Eddy.


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

In this world of confusion, tragedy and discourse, it is wonderful when a resource of grounding through our soul is present. Beautiful write.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

An excellent write of poetry voted up!


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Martin, the women you cast to precede your poetry are always so beautiful. I perceive you see all women as beautiful, no matter their appearance.

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