Puppy Love, and Golden Dreams.

What a cutie pie.

Golden Labrador  Puppy
Golden Labrador Puppy

I Did Spy. (A little bit of nonsense)

Walking home from school today,

I did spy in the shadows, by the tree,

a golden puppy on display.

So shy was he, but wagged his tail,

and rolled over, I could see he was male.

His face was a picture of innocence,

and he came crawling over to me.

"I think I will call you Fred," said I,

lifting his collar to see why,

this golden puppy was out alone,

no where to go, so far from home.

His collar held no clue,

and I knew not what to do,

so in my school bag I did pop,

the golden puppy by the scruff.

His tail and nose poked out,

and I was afraid I heard a shout.

Mother squeeled with delight,

almost cried at the sight,

of the golden puppy.

"You must take him back." she sternly said

"I can't mother, I called him Fred."

Fred is mine now for all to see,

and mine now he will always be.

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Mrs. J. B. 5 years ago from Southern California

Good Morning Meredith and Marlene: I did not intend to put myself down. I know that if I did intentionally that you two would take me behind the barn and knock some sense into me..

Today is sunny for me too. I wish we could all be together, just lounging around my pool, sipping ice tea and laughing about this that and the other. One day, one day.

Okay time to get this home cleaned up...

Hey Meredith how is our story coming along?


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Good Morning to my two new sisters, blue star & Mrs JB~~

I think we will all enjoy joining Mr Website Examiner's new Fiction Reading Club... he wrote a HUB about it that really explains it very well and I have already learned much from him.

I agree with bluestar that none of us needs to ever put ourselves down... I am sad when I read any of my new friends do so in their HUBS or in the comment section and I am very angered when I see others do it to each other in HUBS (or the Forum, which I steer away for the most part). Only God is perfect and that must be a heckuva job... other than that we need to be nice/ help each other out constructively if needed and I am frankly AGOG at the talented writers and the nice folks I have "met" in such a short time...

So here is to a postive and sunny day~~ for me, not weather-wise so I will make it an internally sunny one... Love you both, mar


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Good morning marcoujar and Leelee, you girls are bright and breezy this morning. Thank you both for contacting me today, the sun is shining and all is well. Yes I will of course like to join WEs Fiction Reader's Club, and Leelee what have you been told about putting yourself down, join girl. xx


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Mrs. J. B. 5 years ago from Southern California

Netts: Marcoujor is so sweet.. Are you going to join the fiction club? I would only cause trouble!!! LOL...


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

bluestar~~ I agree with Mrs J B... I really love your poetry and your creative writing as well... I think writing poetry is a gift and you have it, for sure...

I was happy to learn that Website Examiner has a Fiction Readers Club and I have joined it... I believe you should too and your wonderful work would have more opportunity to be critiqued in his newsletter... I learned about it by reading his HUB on it... sounds like fun.

Anyway, keep writing and believing in yourself because I intend to keep reading your work... so glad we found each other. Have a good evening, mar!


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Mrs. J. B. 5 years ago from Southern California

Netts: Your poetry is amazing.... Submit your works...


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi marcujar, I get writers block fairly often and disgustedly to admit, I write a little bit of poetic nonsense, I find it helps put me back on track. I do enjoy writing poetry, but I am not good at it at all, no matter how I try. Willstar and Wayne have been so helpful with writing poetry and I am so very grateful to them both. x


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Gosh, if this is "brain dead...", I am coming back to see the bluestar revived a little because this was Voted UP-FAB (which as you will no doubt come to know, is UP, FUNNY, AWESOME & BEAUTIFUL...!!)

I am lovin some Fred and the attitude of the little owner... finders keepers...!! Thank you for the smile...!


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Mrs. J. B. 5 years ago from Southern California

Excellent so pour me another shot.. Ohh I just want to kiss that little fred..Remember I will be booking all your signings and writing your inside covers... Your tiny little deathly afraid of horses american sister


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Terry.Hirneisen 5 years ago from Shenandoah Valley

Afraid her appendix had cancer cells. I will be limiting my time on the computer.


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi Terry, thank you for stopping by and for the lovely comment. I was just thinking about you and hope your wife is so much better. x


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Terry.Hirneisen 5 years ago from Shenandoah Valley

The golden lab is so cute! Here in the states they use him for the Advantix commercial!

Voted Up and Beautiful!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

b. how are you doing girlfriend. Thank you for you lovely comment and ditty. I loved it and hope you have now found a non running Freddy to keep you company when lover man is not at home. x


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi MysteriousOne, thank you for enjoying my little bit of nonsense. I really do not remember how I got to be here with this hub, but I do remember that it was supposed to be entirely different. x


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b. Malin 5 years ago

How Cute was that Bluestar...VERY! I too once had a Beagle named Freddy...Beagles are runners and so he would run away...finally we took him to a farm, where he could run, and run all day!


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MysteriousOne 5 years ago

beautiful write and handsome little pup....Great job,blue!


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Hi Softie, er Sofs lol. Yes I am like putty in a dog's paw. Love all types of our furry friends, even men with a moustache. Thank you for you lovely comment and support, I do appreciate you stopping by. x


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Eiddwen, how are you today hunnie? Thank you for stopping by and leaving me such encouragement. I enjoy fiddling around with words to try and write a poem now, I say fiddling, because I have not really got to grips with it so far. Bu tas with the very nature of the beast, I shall fight on. x


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sofs 5 years ago

Adorable... and you called me softie:) Haha

Can anyone resist a puppy a golden one at that ?


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

What a beautiful puppy and poem. I push all the buttons for this one.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland Author

Vet, Susan, Sam and Marie, thank you so much for your comments. I am a little bit brain dead at the moment, so decided to write a little bit of nonsense to stir the old brain cells up a little.


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maria.rose 5 years ago from Florida

so sweetttttttttt . i like it so much..


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Sam1970 5 years ago from NY - Londisland

Awww I had a cocker spaniel who looked similiar, but all puppies look the same :D very cute


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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

awww so cute!


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

very cute and such an adorable little puppy

God Bless

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