RULES...by b. Malin

PHOTO by,  Stephan
PHOTO by, Stephan

FROM DAWN TILL DUSK...

The sign reads, POOL RULES...and there are so many of them.

But the one that catches my eye is,

Swimming allowed at this pool, From Dawn till Dusk.

We are now in this pool, this heated pool...

Lover man gives me the LOOK...That Sexual Look.

That says, let's do "IT" here.

I give back the LOOK, that Sexual Look, as I swim over to him

And gently kiss him on the lips...as he grabs my bottom.

We are the only ones in the pool, the heated pool.

Reclining or sitting around the pool, the heated pool...

Are the COMPLAINERS, the GOSSIPERS, the TEXTERS ,

along with the BRAGGERS...and NAGGERS, and some grandchildren.

I think of my family up North and wish, how I wish they were here.

I know they'd enjoy the pool, the heated pool...

And marvel at the Manatees that appear when no boats are near.

We make LOVE more often down here...

More than you care to hear?

Too much information?

Don't fear.

For at Dawn tomorrow, we may go "SKINNY DIPPING" down here.

In the heated pool...the heated pool.

Of course my preference would be by the PALE MOONLIGHT...

With the Stars shinning Bright...

With Lover man and I NAKED as the NIGHT!

But (sigh) the sign say's "SWIMMING FROM DAWN TO DUSK"

Those are the rules...

Well, some RULES are meant to be broken.



Comments 14 comments

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dianeaugust 5 years ago from Tennessee

b.Malin--This is what I love about your words--I LOVE that tell the sexy truth to the page, the real truth to the page. It frees us all to say what we as human beings who are sexual should say. I love how you repeat . . . the heated pool, the heated pool. It almost has a sexual rhythm to it in how you used that phrase--but also all the detail--the manatees--everything so YOU!! That's what keeps me reading. So go take another dip in that heated pool and write about it! Take care, da


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Wow, Dianequgust, thanks for getting it...and you certainly did...thanks for expressing it all so well back. LOL.


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Wow, You are having fun in Florida, aren't you? Bravo!


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epigramman 5 years ago

......wow that is one heated pool of poetry - you're starting to write like the epi-man - lol lol lol - or maybe I'm starting to write like you - lol lol - well this certainly is a loose and spontaneous piece of carnal prose - so just remember you can heat my pool anytime with your fabulous writing ....because you're simply marvelous darling!!!!!!!


Cheryl Kapelner-Champ 5 years ago

Most romantic. Very nice.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hi breakfastpops...I'm such a little Devil...yeah, it's great. Thanks for coming by.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Epigramman, I will take your comments as the supreme compliments...and we could overflow that pool with "our" writings... Right back to you...Ditto,Ditto, DITTO! Thank you!


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Hey Cheryl, short simple words, but they mean a lot to this writer.


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Jaggedfrost 5 years ago

This was very evocative. As prose went it also had a blues flavor. I am not sure why the heat of the pool was important to you, you seemed to make enough heat in your interactions with your beloved to make up for any difference in temperature.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

You my friend need to get more of a sense of humor...Seriously Jaggedfrost, none of this poem needs explaining, it's all in how you read it and perceive it...but thanks for your compliments as well.


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suizyQ 5 years ago

Your words are seductive and beautiful...makes me want to heat my pool! (would take alot of heat since I am knee deep in snow here on the east coast)


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

Thank you SuizyQ for such wonderful comments...I wish you some heat, glad I could give you a little with my Poem..stay warm!


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ImChemist 5 years ago

Wow ,interesting hub , thank you.


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b. Malin 5 years ago Author

ImChemist, welcome to my writings, thanks for enjoying...I will check you out as well.

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