Magic of the Rainbow ~haiku~

A haiku about the magic of the rainbow


A little sprinkle

Rain and sunshine in the sky

Multicolored paint


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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

oh my....what a haiku......so colorfully creative. superb work Spy

up voting and sharing too


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

A brilliant haiku, loved the images. Voting up and beautiful.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Deergha, Jo, thanks so much for reading!


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Perfect!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks snow.


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Pamela99 4 years ago from United States

Love it. The rainbow is beautiful also.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Pamela, thank you dear friend!


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ignugent17 4 years ago

Beautiful Haiku. I am just learning to understand Haiku . What technique is this unknown spy?


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

So lovely!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Lovely, speaking of the variety we have in this world! Great, Spy!


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. To say so much with a few words makes a awesome Haiku !

Vote up and more !!!


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

One of my favorite things - a rainbow. Your haiku represents it well.


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

How beautiful! And I love the photo and illustration. You have a way with words!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Now these few words say it all...


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. There's nothing more beautiful than seeing the reflection of a rainbow after it rains. Voted up!


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

You really know how to write Haiku poems.

Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Awesome, Spy! I love rainbows - they're like seeing God smile. You depicted the rainbow perfectly!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

M,

You are getting very good at these Haikus! This was awesome!


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

You used the Haiku to describe the rainbow perfectly. Thank you. Jamie


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

unknown spy.....WOW..just WOW....


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Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

In 3 short lines you've set my mind free. This haiku had me in daydream land for a second. Good one, Spy!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

The words and the imagery together are just perfect. So very beautiful and simple. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Ignugent.. it's 5-7-5. and i really dont know the technique..im also learning how to write it more effectivley. You can visit Olde Cashmere's hub about writing a haiku.. :)

@Billy, Michelle, Kashmir, Beckie, Suzette, Deb, Lovedoctor,Joyce, J(osh), Jamie, KJF, Ryem, Faith,

I am so happy to read all your messages for my work. I'm still learnign to use words and line that will perfectly fit into a picture. Kepp your fingers crossed! Thank you much!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

How clever you are! Loved it..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Love rainbows. This was colorfully delightful.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you guys!

@Ruby

@Gypsy


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ChristyWrites 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

Awesome Haiku - so much contained in the few words!


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Victoria Lynn 4 years ago from Arkansas, USA

I love the haiku AND the photos!


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CriticalMessage 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

Interesting... and recognized as such.. Natural temporary paint.


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Angelo52 4 years ago from Central Florida

Beautifully expressed. A wonderful haiku meshed well with the illustrations.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hELLO Christy, Victoria, CM, Angelo..

Thank you all for stopping by.


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Love your beautiful haiku and the photo.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hello rosemay, thank you for your message.


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

After the rain, a smile at the thought of you...

Voted UP and very Beautiful!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks my sweet dear Maria!


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CrazedNovelist 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

Short and sweet, Unknown. :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Aubrey, that's sweet, thanks my friend!


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Atiba Sheikh 4 years ago from India

it is a very sublime haiku.describing a thing of beauty in few words but elegantly......great work!!!!!!!!!!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

that was very nice comment Atiba! glad you liked it.

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