Raindrops (tanka)

I watch the raindrops

Coming down one cloudy day

Forming pools once more

Reminders of things gone by

Refreshing the yet to be


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bravewarrior 21 months ago from Central Florida

Ironically, it's raining right now. As the raindrops come down, the sky is littered with raining leaves. It inspired me to record it on my phone. I've never seen it rain leaves before! Pretty cool.


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Faith Reaper 21 months ago from southern USA

Wow, you described my day in the rain today. I love a light rain shower but not that dark, dreary and gloomy overcast skies with that hard rain that won't let up.

Blessings


DJ Anderson 21 months ago

Beautiful, Martin.

No one can capture the "yet to be" better than you.

Have a wonderful day,

DJ.


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travmaj 21 months ago from australia

Oh so evocative - loved this tanka - thank you


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AliciaC 21 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

I enjoyed reading your poem - especially the last line! It's very thought provoking.


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vkwok 20 months ago from Hawaii

Wonderful work, Martin!

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