Raw nerve

 

She said," YOU HAVE ALOT OF

NERVE"

I said," well I do"

"I can control"

"I can deceive"

"I can manipulate"

"I can show you things

You don't want to see"

"I can"

"I could hide inside you”

"You couldn't find me"

"Give you thoughts"

"Make you lust"

"Make you sin"

"Give you hate"

"Let you feel rage"

"Pump your nerves"

"Pinch your heart"

"Bruise your mind"

"Cut your soul"

"I HAVE ALOT OF NERVE?"

"You have alot of nerve

For letting me do this to you"

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habee 6 years ago from Georgia

Smart! Kinda scary, too!


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Sunshiney31 6 years ago Author

yea it is scarey what we allow others to do to us....


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Ouch.. wow. I love the style of this. Forceful and intense. Making people experience the indignation.

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