Razors And Rollercoasters

Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue
Yu Cheng You, Rhythm in Blue

Razors and Rollercoasters

My heart has fallen apart

And crumbled away

I knew this would happen on some fucked up day.

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve thrown my heart away.

Still not satisfied You torment to this day.

Every chance you get you take my heart away

And begin stomping it so far away

Immature reasons and no words to say

Look what you’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away

No thoughts of any of my worries or concerns

You still continue in silence

And I still convey Immature reasons

And for you no words to say

Look what you’ve done

You’ve done you’ve thrown my heart away.

Even in all my pain

You still have no cares

You still continue to rip the heart from my chest

And stomp it away even for the many they.

Immature reason and no words to say look what you’ve

Done you’ve thrown my heart so very far away.

 

Comments 13 comments

getmyback 6 years ago

CONGRATS ON 10 HUBS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your so great.

um, whoever has done this to your heart is a fool and may your heart be replaced with new experiences that bring you the sense of purpose that already lives within you

Dave, keep going, lots of us really are proud of you

billY


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Thank You For Noticing!

Your So Kind.

Means So Much To Me.

This Is A little Older

If Anyone Was Curious.

Nether The Less.


Sapphire Fisher 6 years ago

I'm glad you can show true emotion in your poems Darlin!


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alternate poet 6 years ago

You took it badly then ? only joking, very expressive and I like the psychotic feeling from staying with the end rhyme so long, like picking at a sore! cool.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Lol..Nice!


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

You rock

xo

Kimberly


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blackreign2012 6 years ago

A rate up for sure loved it ~!hugs~


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

So Glad To

Hear BlackReign


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Glad To See Your Curiosity @ Truster


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

Like alternate said, I like the cycle here. The cycle of thought, in my opinion is sometimes so important at conveying for the audience what is the focal point. It brought me through the piece with emotion... betrayal, anger and amazed audacity and the caulousness of peoples disregard. You have a real fan in me.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Such A Well Thought Out Comment

Ahw Constructive Criticism

Some Thing I Can Work With.

I Must Give High Thanks

For Your Words.

Most Glad To Have You As A Fan.


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SummerSteward 6 years ago from Duluth MN

In your mirrored views

Awfullness I have found not

Inspiration; beathless lips upon my cheek

A poet by your words

have found me fanning

It is I who gives thanks

In generousity found.


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

My cue to take a bow.

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