Write What You Would Say.......

Whenever .... whatever the time... rhyme or
the reason ....I think you could
Take the precious hands of time.... unwind them
to allow yourself one moment.... you should

Sit down in the morning as I do
or in the darkness of night as well
And write down exactly what you feel
think of all you could tell

There is always ....there is .....some emotion
that needs to unfold
It can heal your soul.....
when the world leaves you cold

That moment is when I will listen
to each word written by your hand
So that all you ever feel.....
I can understand

Each hurt ....each lie ....each tear
we can take them all away
The writer .......the reader too.....
write all that you would say


Without a touching of flesh nor
hands the healing begins
And as the heart begins to soar
your soul revives again

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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Writing out how I feel has always helped me feel so much better. Great write!


Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

beautifully communicated.


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sassyk73 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

I couldn't have said it better myself :) Once again....your words have found a peaceful place in my heart ;) As usual...voted up and a beautiful after that!


alastar packer 5 years ago

Words written deep down raise up from the very essence of one's being that which is always best.Thank you ahorseback for this poem that beautifuly expresses the sentiment so very fine.


marellen 5 years ago

You are so right. I have journals that I write in or type something on the computer and its amazing how better I feel.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Writing the way you fell is the most powerful form pf expression and usually turn out to be your best work.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Just Ask Susan, I never began untill about ten years or so ago. I wish I had ough especially here among such great people ....Thank you Susan....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Binaya , Thank you my friend.....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Sassy , Thank you , we share something neat , Yes?.......:-] Makes me smile.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Alastar Packer, Thank you kind sir , I love your writing style , I WILL catch up with you!......:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Marellen , I can see now why so many kept journals or diaries. I did not though. Bottling things up is no good! Thanks for reading.......:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , true ,true I am finding out how it feels to be human!....lol. By writing. I was always a reader but not a writer .........Nice to see you. I am going to the sea in Maine [Cold water}and stick my toes in this weekend. I will think of you there in the warmest sea around.......;-}


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Beautiful!


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Ain't it the truth, Feeling takes time. feeling the ' Old kentucky rain', Oh, Elvis i miss you.


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

Absolutely awesome! Thank you for this. Writing what we're feeling sets us free.


jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Wow ! this is what i tend to tell people when they ask me ,"how do you write like this?" , i tell them to write from their heart, their soul , to delve into the depths of their inner self and they will release what is pent up devouring themselves ...this is a great hub thanks for sharing !


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

WillStarr , Thank you , good to see ya....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always Exploring ,Great song! "with the rain in my shoes".....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Paradise , Thank you and yes thats true!....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Jami , thank you ,you are right about that my friend!.......:-}


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Exactly! How else can one write? Well, how can one write anything other than what comes from one's deepest being and have it be meaningful? I seldom even try to "just write" but if and when I do, the result is wooden.

This is so well done, ahorseback. I love it.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Nellieanna , Look at that beautiful new picture! .And the woman is so right ! Thank you!.....:-}


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

(blush) - why, thank you, kind sir!


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

This was just simply so beautiful.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Qudsia , Well thank you my friend! .......:-}


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sonia05 5 years ago from india

simply beautiful !!!


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carolp 5 years ago from Switzerland

I love your work. This piece is beautiful. When i was on my highschool and college days, i used to write all what i felt specially when in moments of sadness and frustrations. It relieves me after. Many years i have not written since i came to Europe. Now that i am in Hubpages, i am beginning to enjoy what i write. Thanks for sharing.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Sonia05, thank you very much! .....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

CarolP, And you must write on! It calls to you! I don't honestly know where I would be if I hadn't begun to write. Somehow it frees the part of us that needs freeing.......Thank you!....:-}


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Brilliant and I can without a doubt relate to this one.

Writing does indeed release the spirit,only my writing would have enabled me to reach that deep and for the first time to know the true me from within.

Thank you for sharing this one which I vote up and bookmark.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Eiddwen , You are so right about writing, I couldn't begin to do any of this in person , funny huh? Not funny Ha Ha , but funny wierd! Thanks for you're sharing always!.....:-}

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