Really In Love-A Poem

Really In Love

Love can be a losing game

If you allow the hurting pain

that comes along once in a while

and tries to take away your smile.

Let things go slow

but, don't be teased

and maybe then

you can be pleased

open your heart

and show you care

but dont take life

as so unfair

when you hold

nothing in front

and nothing above

that's when you know

your truely in love.

VLH 1988

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IN2Deep 5 years ago Author

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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

Beautiful!


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elvit 5 years ago

It's beautiful, but you know love is filled with both honey and venom... I want some honey, but I don't want the venom.... Anyway that was thoughtful.


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lilibees 5 years ago

Nice,and beautiful!

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