Rebirthing with the rain

Listen to No easy way out by Bullet for my valentine

Wherever fate throws me I am not ready to fall

I am not ready to tremble and lose it all

My persistence is all what I’ve got

So I will not lose it or forget

That it is my soul that makes me I will bear

I will conquer not the other way around I swear

I will rise to the occasion I will

And when the dark decides my blood to spill

I will not scream in agony for I got hard will

Tough like granite, down to earth

Like diamond hard in core forged out of the flames’ breath

It is time for me to lead myself through darkness into eternal light

For I have finally found the key to my success and won the fight

If the razors fall deep on the veins I will call

I am far stronger to fall

I am the refined version of my soul

And unbeatable entity, finally one whole

There is more than meets the eye

Like my wings which I spread up high

I am not a broken soul never was

But today I am the decider far more than life’s claws

Far beyond the pain and all its evil

Crawling back to love decisive like an eagle

No more suffering no more tears of agony or pain

Let this day mark a new beginning with the falling of the rain

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blackreign2012 6 years ago

Nice hub ~hugs~ Liked the imagery

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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Your unique style of writing,I find, is quite intriquing Uriel...

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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

beautiful poem thanks

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tantrum 6 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

Love this poem !Even it's not so dark as others ! :)

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Thank you guys for your support it means a lot :D

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jayb23 6 years ago from India

I just fell in love with this poem. Awesome, voted up too. Have been away from HP for such a long time and I have missed your poems. Will be sharing this one with my friends too. Keep up the good work and now I have to catch up with ur other poems :-)

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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Strong soul will never fall in the darkness even when it is the only friend we have for now. You go, girl!

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Jayb , thanks for stopping by . As for a starters i had been over my head with studying this year since i had official exams to pass and now that they are done i can go back to my routine in writing and sharing by thoughts with you on hubpages. So thanks for the concern and i hope i live up to the standards of hubpages and is thrilling writers and beating hearts.

Freya by loyal friend, i discovered in the end that life is all about determination and believing in yourself as well as God who knows everything and more, Al Mighty who knows beyond what the greatest minds and perceive. I have learned to do what i have to do, give it the best shot, and in the end pray to God and know that there is always a better plan for me.

Been glad really Glad to meet you here. Hoping to catch up with you on a regular basis.

Yet for now i bid you farewell and hope you are having a great time.


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Cris A 6 years ago from Manila, Philippines

The rain always does offer newness, freshness, rebirth... I missed your poetry :D

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Cris thanks man ~ i have to say i missed HP a looooooooooooooooooooot (too much O's doesn't really signify how much i missed writing here, ie just being myself. Yesterday i was viewing your profile . I was almost going to click on one of your latest hubs when electricity went~ it kinda pissed me off because it has been a while since i checked your profile. Anyhow, gonna check your hubs now :D

Hoping you are having a good day,


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