Red Water

Clouded, crowded, shrouded with cry

Fallen, I’m falling outta space, black sky

Face broken, broken pieces, what remains

Red water, in pain, through these veins


A place, a pace, I’ll be there, right where

Nobody knows, hands up, they stare

Touch like this, never, never once before

Deep, devoured heart, sunk in her core


Out of time, no time, it stops, oh well

Walls, these walls, they bleed in this cell

Fear the fear, down fall, red water tears

Wide asleep, asleep I walk, into the years


Taken away, promises, take by the hands

Out my mind, my mind, no witness stands

Nobody knows, motives, overdosed by lies

But alone, death, gladly taken in her eyes


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

wow bella this was amazing.. oh and happy new year :)


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Frank,

Thank you Its been a food minute :) Happy New Year!!


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

good**


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SkySlave 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

This one gives me chills. Looking forward to reading some more,

-Skyler


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

SkySlave,

Thank you as I wrote it, it did the same :) likewise.

Bella


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shanmarie 2 years ago from Texas

Wow! What a pace and rhythm you have going there! It fits the chilling words so well.


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Shanmarie,

Thanks was feeling that kinda way yesterday

Bella. :)


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Nikkij504gurl 2 years ago from Louisiana

love the writing style in this one, it just flows. Good one for your first post back on here in so long! Hope you have been better than the emotions running through this poem!


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Hey Sunshine,

I have been doing really well actually! I have just been living and fixing the things I destroyed lol I get my little emo trips here and there that get me to write yes a feeling at the moment can make it seem like your life is up in flames but actually Im good Thank you, yes I have been away for quite some time but you know me I go away and come back when needed. Miss ya girlie!! Oh BTW I might be heading to Louisiana Soon Maybe we can arrange a meet up ...

Bella, :P


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Nikkij504gurl 2 years ago from Louisiana

That is good to hear! Yea I get my moments like that too but I have been great as well. Nothing like a trip down memory lane to get your writing flowing. Miss you as well, and that is great! What are you coming here for? What part of Louisiana?


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Well mine may have been in reality at the moment but a feeling that passed with time. ;) I am not sure yet what part but definitely I will visit will keep you posted....


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Nikkij504gurl 2 years ago from Louisiana

ok let me know! do you have facebook?


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

To mind come chilling and thrilling. Great pic.


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Gypsy Rose Lee,

Thank you for stopping by I appreciate the comment glad it gave some type of feeling. :)

Bella


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SubRon7 2 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Good job, Bellawritter23!


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bellawritter23 2 years ago from California Author

Thanks a bunch Sub, long time no read :)

Bella


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apache13 2 years ago from Belleville AR.

As always your darkness brings me up bella, that may sound strange but before I found bellawriter23 I never really understood poetry. Some but not like yours, thanks.


MAMEPIPOU 2 months ago

Wide asleep of dreaming,

Bloody streams of crying,

And so she taken death by glad,

A story that's kind of sad

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