Red Lace? (limerick)

Her eyes bloomed the promise of morn

Her lips were where wishes were born

Her skin heaven’s grace

Where dreams gently race

Her beard with red lace was adorn


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lovedoctor926 3 years ago

Good imagery, nice work. voted up awesome & beautiful.


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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Vivid image.... Beautiful words! Great job, MH..... Voting up and awesome!


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

So that's why you showed her from the back...(grin)


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Didn't expect that. Great one.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Ummmm, which beard???? ha ha!


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

She was a true beauty from head to toe,

One glance told you all you needed to know. :)


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Life Iz Beautiful 3 years ago from India

Nice work...:) and nice picture...

have a great day...:)


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

Ouch!!


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Funny limerick, with a twist ending too.


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

love your pen here... and how you say so much, with so little... a trait of a great writer


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

oooops... Jamie


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Victoria Lynn 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Very nice! Flowed really well and made me smile, too!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Her beard? lol so funny.. red lace

you are the poet of originality

blessings

Debbie


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

O, dear. Not quite what we would expect..Thanks for the smiles this evening, Mh...

Sending you more Angels this evening. :) ps


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Great poem with a twist !!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Suppose that was the bearded lady from the circus. lol


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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Well,I didn't see that one coming:)


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

How do you keep coming up with these!!!! LOL!

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