Relativity And Women

"Put your hand on a hot stove for a minute, and it seems like an hour. Sit with a pretty girl for an hour, and it seems like a minute. THAT'S relativity."

˜Albert Einstein˜



Eternity is but an instant,

a moment that lasts forever.

A memory.

A woman's heavenly lips ever so softly,

singing the sweetest goodness to me.

Instantaneously,

she is I, as I am her.

We are one.

Forging a bond that seemed like it took

forever to make.

Warned never to go astray,

an unfaithful man plus a woman scorned

equals instant hell!

For God's sake,

I've died a thousand times

paying for that mistake.











Copyright © 2011 Daunt'e Loper


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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

My favorite subject is women. The hardest lessons are women. The timeless joy, and perhaps a little Hell, are women.

Hang in there, my friend. We all grow and learn every day, and some lessons never fade away...


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks bb, it's not really a personal experience but I think that anyone can relate. I have a weird sense of humor:)


PenMePretty 5 years ago from Franklin

Short and sweet. Awesome.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks PenMePretty


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Lakshmi Murukesh 5 years ago from Kollam

Good work Daunte...!!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Lakshmi


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Norma Budden 5 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

I can imagine that a repentant soul would die a thousand times after having made such a mistake.

Great writing; it draws me in as though I'm reading a factual piece of writing.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks Norma


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Hilarity 5 years ago from Long Beach, California

I liked it..short and to the point. Nice flow. Good job!

Smooches..


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Hilarity


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ravenblueu 5 years ago from Somewhere Tropical

short poem but delivered message you wanted to. Nice.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Raven

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