Remember Me, I’ll Remember You

Remember me

as I will remember you

my summer love so true

you are the sun to me

the days so happy and bright

your kisses like sweet strawberries

your eyes as blue

as the sky above

remember me

as I will remember you

when the autumn winds

come blowing in

our summer will always remain

in a special place in my heart

it will be written in the stars

when the autumn moon shines

that once there was you

and once there was me

together we had a love

in the lazy summertime

picnics with the scent

of flowers and newly mown grass

drifting all around

dances on the seashore

and tender kisses

as waves rippled about

remember me

as I will remember you

watching as the waves

wash away our love letters in the sand

perhaps when the winter comes

remembering these days

will bring a warm glow to your heart

to remember me

as I will remember you

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Missy Smith 15 months ago from Florida

Beautiful Gypsy! I love how you describe love through the seasons and love letters in the sand. It's really just a beautiful image. Thanks for sharing!


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Jodah 15 months ago from Queensland Australia

Another lovely poem Rasma, and the Elvis song was the icing on the cake. I voted for you as best poet in the Hubby Awards because I always feel good after reading your poetry, unfortunately you didn't win. Maybe next year.


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ladyguitarpicker 15 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

A wonderful poem remembering a very special person in your life. You did a great job. Thanks.


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Perspycacious 15 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

I like it. I like it. Sweetness of summer romances ended too soon but not to be forgotten.


Andrew Chaffey 15 months ago

A beautifully written poem, I thoroughly enjoyed it.


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supremeupbeat k 15 months ago from Somewhere in India

Where has he gone that you are remembering him? Break up !!!!

Purpose is nostalgia for the lover but the poem is on nature. Seasonal nature is vividly and animatedly described.


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m abdullah javed 15 months ago

Gypsy your poem of love simply drives us crazy.... What an expression of love it is.... the heaven, the earth and the seasons in between have been beautifully covered, what else one can think of love?

Your title of the poem instantly reminded me of the Quran which says the same:

.... Remember Me and I will remember you... (chapter 2: Verse 152). Thanks for sharing and reminding me Gypsy. May God bless you.


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Vellur 15 months ago from Dubai

Beautiful! Enjoyed reading.


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Phyllis Doyle 15 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

Oh, Gypsy, this is such a lovely poem with tender memories. Thank you for sharing such beauty.


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ahorseback 15 months ago

Gypsy , I never even met you and I'll remember ! Awesome visions .


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Gypsy Rose Lee 15 months ago from Riga, Latvia Author

You welcome Missy Smith.

Thank you Jodah and thank you for voting for me. Elvis always inspires.

You welcome ladyguitarpicker.

Thank you Demas.

Thank you Andrew.

Thank you supremeupbeat K.

Thank you m abdullah jayed and blessings to you too.

Thank you Vellur.

You welcome Phyllis.

Thank you and always remembering you too Ed.


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful! Oh I don't want the summer to end. Elvis adds so much to this piece. I love your poetry and Elvis....


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bravewarrior 15 months ago from Central Florida

I always looked forward to summer love when I was in high school. Why did it always have to end?


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manatita44 15 months ago from london

Extremely beautiful, Gypsy.

"your kisses like sweet strawberries." -Gypsy Rose Lee.

'Cool' touch, eh? Have a great week-end.


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Genna East 15 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

What a lovely poem...it reminds us of summer love and love of summer that is about to end soon. May it live in our hearts for a long time. -)


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BlossomSB 15 months ago from Victoria, Australia

So romantic! I love it.


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annart 15 months ago from SW England

Beautiful memories that deserve to be kept in our hearts. Beautiful poetry to convey all those things. Well done. It takes us all back to those summers!

Ann


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Cyndi10 15 months ago from Georgia

So sweetly written. Wonderful to read.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 14 months ago from Riga, Latvia Author

Wishing you all a relaxing and sunny weekend.

Thank you Ruby. Elvis has always inspired me.

You know Shauna, if I could I would follow summer around the world.

Thank you Manatita.

I think summer lingers on for quite awhile before autumn really settles in Genna.

Thank you Blossom.

Thank you Ann.

Thank you Cyndi.


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Luna Blue 11 months ago

I have been here before myself, oh to be remembered as we remember it... Lovely words Gypsy :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 11 months ago from Riga, Latvia Author

Thank you Luna Blue.

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