Remember to your Death


Pain takes time to heal---every tear I cried drown me


Lost treasure that I once found now drift away---once it’s lost again


-----remember to your death-----to your grave---you once murder someone life


--------------------physically and mentally



I’ll move on....don’t worry


I’ll find my way----someday


-------------I’ll hold on to the edge of that cliff


Someday I’ll find my strength and climb back---full recovery



I’ll be strong when times come...stronger than before


My heart builds not one stone...but three and many more


--------------To this day you won----your turn will come


You’ll lose---you’ll die by the same pain you poured into my life



Karma have you not heard? It exist---not that I curse


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

God new it sounds like you can see your way out of the depths of pain.

Voted up and awesome, Joyce.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Good share. I wish I had hope for you. Aug. 11, 2003


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Astra Nomik 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I firmly believe in karma. What will go one way can well come back round again. I try to never hate the people who brought bad things in my life. I often feel that by hating them somehow, I end up less pure of heart... and that can be like a cancer with no ending.

I had a chance to tell someone who hurt me once that I forgave them and wished them well... the result was so amazing... I wasn't sure I meant what I said till I saw the tears flowing ...


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Shri Mc 4 years ago

Yes karma come to those who hurt us but let only your goodd memories of him someplace in your heart. Each day is a clean slate for you now like a new canvas you should paint on each day until you redefine your dream. Live and love free not in bondage but in a way that heals others and yourself.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Sure good karma is just around the bend. It will help to heal.


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

So much pain, sadness and anger in this poem. I hope you will find your way through it with the help of loving people. It's so hard to fall in love and be hurt. We've all been there. Blessings :-)


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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

I hope this isn't how you're actually feeling right now...if it is, I hope the pain heals quickly.

Lots of pain and anger here, as already mentioned in the comments, but the poem is a good one. Voted up.

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