Remember Where We Made Love (limerick)

Remember the night of affair

That place where our love we did bare

Where love lit the sky

As passions did fly

I think I left my car keys there


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Hurry now, and your steps retrace

Back to Motel Six - that was the place.


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Curiad 3 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Must have been good!


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

But was it worth it? LOL


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DanaTeresa 3 years ago from Ohio

Car, truck, cemetery.... some of the best love (if you wanna call it that) i ever made was in cheap motels... place doesn't matter, it's how you use it! LOL! ;)


Valleypoet 3 years ago

You will have to find those if you want to get her going again...the car that is! LOL:-))


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Almost thought you were skipping a funny! Great one.


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pstraubie48 3 years ago from sunny Florida

So, that could be embarrassing..going to retrieve them, depending on where they were left..o my..I laughed out loud.

Good morning and happy day 10 0f our new year....Sending you, Angels, my friend....:) ps


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breakfastpop 3 years ago

How utterly romantic and super sensitive! You are the best! Voted up, funny and awesome!


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Angelo52 3 years ago from Central Florida

Funny. Good use of the limerick style - gave me a chuckle or two.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Understadable... you were otherwise occupied. Lol

Thanks for the chuckle


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

That was great!!


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Life and Luxury 3 years ago from South Beach, FL

Cool!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Did you call a cab? Funny..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

How did you get home? lol


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Was it a long walk?


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Martin car keys..lol.. you are great..

hugs

Debbie

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