Remembering When (tanka)

Remembering when

Lovers in each others’ arms

Under moonlit stars

Join in a timeless refrain

Lost in remembering when


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GusTheRedneck 3 years ago from USA

Good stuff, Martin (Mhatter99)

Gus :-)))


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

Remembering when allows us to hold on to that loving feeling.


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Well job done. voted up ++++++ shares.


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LaThing 3 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Circle of Life! Great tanka, MH! Enjoyed it.... All the best to you, dear friend! Voting up and ++


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epigramman 3 years ago

...yes I remember the time when ....well, before you showed up Sir Martin and hub life was boring .....


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epigramman 3 years ago

did I spell that correctly? B - O - R - I - N - G -


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

When:)Is that all?or are you playing tricks on our minds? lol Good job,and sorry,I am slow on the uptakes hahahaha lol


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh I remember when.. with tears and love and wishing and wanting and thank you for a wonderful poem. and I agree with Colin the Hub would be BORING without you

blessings

Debbie


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Superbly done, my talented conspirator!


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Awesome and beautiful...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Simply and romantically beautiful.


Sueswan 3 years ago

"Join in a timeless refrain" Beautiful!

Voted up and sharing

Take care :)


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

sigh..melancholy moment, M...

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