Rescue Me (Poetry)

Rescue Me

My universe,

Space that I have chosen,

Extreme somewhat,

One might not care to notice.

Hot summer breezes,

Darkness exchanges places with light,

Stale liquor morning drinks.

She floated into my space

With the deadbeats and the rowdies.

Intensity and sweet demore,

Eyes silent as stars,

A goddess demanding attention.

She feeds herself to my heart

Measuring elements of flavor.

I have to run-have to flee

Before fate does its part

And I am left

With another

Lonely teardrop.

The Future

Love is an addiction sequestered in the heart, demanding satisfaction

Assess the roads that you travel. The mental force of love liberates the soul. Good in the world is increased when your actions benefit others. My book, Positive Romance by Rudy Lopez, looks at all matters of the heart with encouraging and compromising attitudes. It is available on any major online book store or any public library will request it for you at no cost or may be purchased at www.eloquentbooks.com/PositiveRomance.html

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PoetwoPoem 9 months ago from Dallas Author

Thank you Dana Tate, I went through this one time so I put it into words.


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Dana Tate 9 months ago from LOS ANGELES

Beautiful words. I loved it.


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PoetwoPoem 10 months ago from Dallas Author

Thank you jgshorebird


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manatita44 10 months ago from london

Again a loving Hub and write. Wish you all success, Rudy. Dios te bendiga Y acompane. Hasta La proxima!


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jgshorebird 10 months ago from Earth

My favorite line is "Eyes silent as stars."


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PoetwoPoem 10 months ago from Dallas Author

Thank you lady guitarpicker glad you enjoyed it.


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ladyguitarpicker 10 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

Very different, but I like the style.


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moonlake 10 months ago from America

Enjoyed your poem.


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word55 10 months ago from Chicago

Pretty cool piece of poetry.


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swalia 10 months ago

Interesting!


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PoetwoPoem 10 months ago from Dallas Author

Thank you Missy Smith your opinion means a lot to me.


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Missy Smith 10 months ago from Florida

I like the exchange of words in this one. They seem to flip a different beat but bouncing off each other. I hope that makes sense? It's how I interpreted it while reading it. Very unique!

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