Revealing Anew Free Verse Original Poetry

Revealing Anew

Do not

follow me

through the

dark black waters

allow me

to continue

feeling the cold

pressing on

until the

sensation of warmth

swathes my spirit enough

caresses my

entire being

doubling clarity

chancing my return

welcoming everything good

creation refuses to deny

'till my soul

mends of morbid pain

in humble elation

until we meet again.



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manatita44 24 months ago from london

Beautiful poem. Sweet song and worthy to be addressed to God, the Supreme Singer. Thanks.


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jhamann 22 months ago from Reno NV

Beautiful poetry, thank you for sharing. Jamie


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Denizee 19 months ago Author

Sorry for my lapse in responding to your comments - (Health issues) are keeping me from posting anything new to my Hubpage - I'm so glad that you both enjoyed this write - thank you I am humbled by your responses.

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