Revolting Heart

Ill take two of those and sleep for now

But I know it'll still hurt when I wake

The day O the day It's bright out

The sun it burn's thy pale skin

That moon it glows gently on it

I miss it I miss missing the memories

Id rather be human in a blanket thinking

But now I'm a grounded flower just wilting

I wasn't always at one time I was a boy

I wished upon a star and became pedals

It was my decision and I live in it

I'm here and real just faded a bit

And hurting

Blame it on the burning stars

I shouldn't be crying tears are

poetic nonsense here and seem

To be a necessity though

I should dare to be brave

For you




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alternate poet 6 years ago

those pills are death in a sugar coat ah!


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clickmarbin 6 years ago from philippines

nicely writtern


Joy56 profile image

Joy56 6 years ago

heartfelt once again....


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Joshua Kell 6 years ago from Arizona

Deep.


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epigramman 6 years ago

you always take me deep into the labyrinth of poetry

with no easy answers, full of complexity and a very very challenging read - this is as pure as poetry gets!!!


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KatyLove777 6 years ago

This is beautiful.. :)


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bonnebartron 6 years ago from never one place for too long

You are no wilted flower, but a bulb reaching for that pinhole of breaking light!


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Entwinds 6 years ago

I wilt in my filth it blankets me.

Taunts and it haunts and fallows me to the depth of the sea.

Is there any returning of me as of now I can't truly see.

Just remember your words are a blessing to read.

I'm a poison a hazard hell what does it matter.

I devote myself to bring back your flowers health.

Through the thickens of trees a disease you will see.

A disease of health and belief to recover your color and set you free.

That star is still high in the sky to make your wish on tonight.

I searched high and low just to find that special glow.

I'm sorry I'm saddened why did that happen.


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lalesu 6 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

I'd sooner believe the stars don't burn than believe I don't, but they'll take the fall and not complain...that's more than I can say for myself. Lovely, pensive poem.


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epigramman 6 years ago

I come back to this particular piece and say that there are poets - and then there is someone like you!

And you stand apart from this madding crowd!


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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

You have a true talent. Keep pondering and make us ponder.


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

aye they are!

I take forever to get to anywhere,

at times i seem to be nowhere! I usually do get there or is it here! I hope I am forgiven for being so late. ~aloha nui~


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Anywhere Here There ...


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

Oj my

another amazing piece

Thank you


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Your Welcome


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

This is very deep...and very moving...wonderful poem..voted up ....debbie


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Awful Poet 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Always happy to see intrest and recieve feedback , More than obliged~

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