Revolving Repetitively

Letting them in loving will lead to

Days of grueling misery

Thousands of hours of nothing

But never ending pain

Just imagine ten thousand dull

Blades cutting into you simultaneously

And multiply it by a million biting teeth

And It still doesn’t compare to just exactly

What You Are Causing

You are hazardous You should come

With an explicit warning

Now stop and think for one

Lousy seconded second

Why do you do the

Thing’s you are doing ?

And do you have any true meaning ?

What are the ulterior motives you seek ?

Just how did this come to be ?

Do not let them enter at this time

We need to scream validly.

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SilentReed 6 years ago from Philippines

A valid point. Unfortunately the mind is like a monkey riding on a horse. I like this poem


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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

We still love misery it seems. Great poem.


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

I had to read it twice, i think i got it, 'misery loves

company' (no)

I liked it!


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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

We can be are own worst enemy

Or we can be are own hero


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Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

This is a good one, thought I lost you for a seconded second then I added a splint to it and got it! thumbs up!

~aloha~

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