Rictameter poetry- Summertime

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More rain?

Summer

Sweltering heat

Blazing fires in the west

The midwest flooding, fatalties

Tornadoes targeting southern districts

Golf size hail demolishing gardens

Humidity muggy

July ending

Summer

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DJ Anderson 16 months ago

You nailed this one, Ruby.

What a crazy summer this has been and continues to be.

Have not heard that song by the Everly Brothers in forever.

Great job, Ruby!

DJ.


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mckbirdbks 16 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

You certainly coveed a lot of territory with this one. Voted Up and shared.


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bravewarrior 16 months ago from Central Florida

Ruby, I was just talking to a friend (in cyber space) about the rain. We have so much rain here in Florida while other areas are dry as a bone and literally burning up. It seems so unfair.


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DzyMsLizzy 16 months ago from Oakley, CA

Very nicely done, and great video choice as well!

Voted up ++


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello DJ. I just now got home from town and had to stay in the store because it was raining so hard I couldn't see to drive. I am so sick of rain. None of my flowers came up that I planted, I'm sure the rain washed them away. I hadn't heard that song either. Thank's for the, " You nailed it. " comment. It's fun doing poetry in syllables...Hugs.


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billybuc 16 months ago from Olympia, WA

Yep, that about sums it up. It's been the hottest summer on record here in western Washington. I would gladly send the heat somewhere else.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mike. I changed internet and TV service from Direct to Dish with satellite high speed and still don't have the Twitter share. Thank you for coming to read my summertime piece. I'll be glad when fall arrives. ( I can't believe I said that. ) lol..Hugs...


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Shauna. I agree. Why can't it rain in Calif. to fight the fires? This has been a summer so different. Hardly anyone has any tomatoes, they just rotted in the ground from all the rain....Thank you..Hugs....


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello DzyMsLizzy. Happy to see you on my page. Thank you for your " Nicely done. " comment....


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Bill. I'm with you 100%. Enough rain and heat already! Thank's my friend...


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cam8510 16 months ago from Columbus, Georgia until the end of November 2016.

I get to travel a lot in my work. When I was in western Montana for six months, I witnessed several, extensive wildfires in the dry heat of summer. While on the east coast, I visited the New Jersey Pine Barrens which is an aquifer containing 17 trillion gallons of the cleanest water on earth. Now I'm in southern Oregon and am witnessing the falling water levels of the rivers, lakes and reservoirs of the area. The winter snow pack has been declining, resulting in a drought that is alarming to locals.

It's a wide world and nature is in an upheaval everywhere, it seems. I think the water situation highlights this fact more than anything else does.


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drbj 16 months ago from south Florida

What a depressing picture you painted, Ruby, with your poetry, but I forgive you because the sun came out again when I viewed that photo of those trees with spectacular lavender and purple blossoms. That was a treat and the Everly Brothers was the icing. Thank you, m'luv.


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clivewilliams 16 months ago from Nibiru

So much said in with such little words. Marvelous


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Faith Reaper 16 months ago from southern USA

Wow, Ruby, you have painted a true picture with your word of summertime for sure! It is so muggy here with violent rainstorms almost every evening I get hit with them on my commute home. Everyone has to turn on their hazard flashers so no one will run into each other, for that is hard the rain is falling. Your title is brilliant and perfect too.

Up +++ and away

Peace and blessings ...and stay safe!


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Frank Atanacio 16 months ago from Shelton

mouth opened.. chin hitting the floor... ( That Good )


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whonunuwho 16 months ago from United States

You have included the true essence of Summer. Nice work. whonu


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Minnetonka Twin 16 months ago from Minnesota

Ruby-Great job with Rictameter poetry. A crazy summer indeed in regards to all the weather. Voted up and hit many buttons.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Cam. This has been a completely different summer. It has rained most everyday. All our rivers are out flooding the low lands like never before. Our climate is changing as we speak. Of course you've seen that with your travels. I know you travel as a lab tech. I worked as a traveling nurse for a short time. Thank's for your perspective on our changing weather.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello drbj. I did paint a depressing picture of the summer. Usually it's the best time of the year. I will say that it's not raining today but it could happen. ( I hope not! ) Thank you..Hugs..


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Clive. Rictameter poetry is done in syllables. It has nine lines, The first line is 2 syallables, the second line has 4, the third line has 6, the fourth has 8, the fifth has 10, the sixth has 8, the seventh line has 6, the eighth line has 4, the ninth line has 2 and it must be the same name as the first line. It's all about counting syllables. No rhyming necessary. I hope you try it....Thank you....


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Faith. It has been the same here, blinding rain with lightening. Your commute sounds so dangerous. Stay dry and safe my friend..Hugs..Thank you...


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Frank. Your comment warms ' me ' heart. Thank you so much...


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello whonunuwho. Thank you for the nice work comment. Glad you came by.....


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Linda. I guess we all got our share of this crazy summer? Thank's for hitting the many buttons...Hugs...


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DDE 16 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Great! I enjoyed reading. Summer has been very much hooter than last year in Croatia. I like your description.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello DDE. Nice to see you again. Happy you enjoyed..Cheers...


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annart 16 months ago from SW England

Great poem! I wouldn't mind some of that heat at the moment, as I sit here in a damp Somerset nowhere near Summer temperatures!

Lovely!

Ann


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Ann. Nice to see you. Fall is fast approaching and it will be welcomed by me. I can't remember a summer like this one, so much rain....Thank you...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 16 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Enjoyed this Ruby. Summers can be that way but not here they are much too cool for me.


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AudreyHowitt 16 months ago from California

It has been a crazy summer for us in California--muggy, hot, dry--and your poem captures the weirdness of it for me--


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MartieCoetser 16 months ago from South Africa

Auuww, I could smell the rain!

Every season has its ups and downs. I hate hail in the summer. The damages done to gardens, crops, buildings, cars, etc, always leave us sad and disheartened. But then, I am grateful because we don't have tornadoes and heavy snow.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Rasma. I didn't know your climate was cool in the summer. Happy you enjoyed. Thank you..


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Audrey. I hope you are not near the fires. I wish I could send you some of this rain...Thank you....


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Martie. You're so lucky not to have tornadoes. We get it all except hurricanes. I think I'm ready for fall and you're getting ready for summer. So good to see you...Hugs...


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Genna East 16 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

Hi Ruby. I am still in awe of how easily you write this style of poetry. You captured "summer" perfectly. Voted up and shared.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Genna. I love doing syllable poetry. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for sharing..Hugs..


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B. Leekley 16 months ago from Kalamazoo, Michigan, USA

Well done, Ruby Jean. This is a quite effective example of rictameter poetry.


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always exploring 16 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello B. Leekley. Thank you. Glad you thought this piece was effective...


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pstraubie48 15 months ago from sunny Florida

Yes Ruby summer does bring those things...and I watch and pray that those affected will survive ....and be able to salvage whatever they can...we have had one of the rainiest summers in many many years (my plants love it) but have had no horrible things happen....and we are blessed.

Well done in your unusual poetic style

Know once again that Angels are headed your way ps


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Shyron E Shenko 15 months ago

Ruby, you certainly described the way this summer is going. In early we had so much rain everything was drowning and now for the last two months not even a drop.

Your poetry is beautiful as usual. I would give you a thump-up but the thumbs have disappeared.

Blessings and hugs dear Ruby


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Patricia. I can't ever remember having this much rain. Now we're in need of rain. I had to water my flowers this week. Go figure? Thank you..Many blessings..


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Shyron. After having rain all summer I had to water my flowers this week. I wonder what happened to the thumbs up? Thank you for coming by. Blessings and hugs my friend,,,


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WillStarr 15 months ago from Phoenix, Arizona

This is beautiful, Ruby Jean! Wow!


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rebeccamealey 15 months ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

That sums up the summer weather quite well! And in a lovely poetic form!


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Will. I'm always pleased when you visit my page. Thank you!


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always exploring 15 months ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello rebeccamealey. We are still having above high trmps. here. Thank you much..

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    I am a writer of poetry and fiction. I especially love flash fiction. My name is Ruby, and I live in Southern Illinois. I am a retired R.N.



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