Rictameter poetry for Valentine Day

First kiss

Expermental

Anxiously awaiting

Antipiation expanding

Fluttering heart-beat tingling sensation

Complection ruddy glittering

Moist lips pursed eagerly

Embracing arms

First kiss.

Embracing arms.

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billybuc 2 years ago from Olympia, WA

There is nothing like that first kiss, is there Ruby? Such sweet anticipation and heavenly results. :) Well done my romantic friend.


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AudreyHowitt 2 years ago from California

So sweet and tender Ruby! Well done!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Bill, I must confess, i am a hopeless romantic. Valentine Day is special. My son called today and said that he bought roses, candy and a lovely card for his wife Janie. I told him he was a special man. Thank you Bill, love your comment...


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Audrey, I love doing Rictameter poetry, so glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the well done comment...


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tobusiness 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Oh yes...I remember it well! Beautifully done. :)


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old albion 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Ruby. A lovely hub as usual. The video 'Young Love'

I remember it so well. It truly brings back memories for me. Brilliant.

Graham.


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manatita44 2 years ago from london

Cool. Nice memories.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello tobusiness, I do too, aren't memories sweet? Thank you for a beautifully done comment...


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Graham, I'm so glad this brought back memories. Thank you for supporting my poetry. I appreciate you.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello manatita, Nice to meet you. Thank you for a cool comment...


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sweethearts2 2 years ago from Northwest Indiana

Anticipation of that first kiss - I still remember. Thanks for the reminder


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PegCole17 2 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Perfectly delightful for this wonderful Valentines day. Hoping you had a fun filled and romantic day, Ruby. I loved this sweet poem.


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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

What a wonderful Valentine's Day poem...nothing better than the first kiss.


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Genna East 2 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

This is a lovely poem for Valentine’s Day, Ruby…perfect! I love how you write rictameter…this isn’t an easy style of poetry to write. Happy Valentine's Day. Voted up and sharing. :-)


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Ruchira 2 years ago from United States

This was beautiful Ruby.

Happy Valentine, my friend!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello sweethearts, How sweet, you still remember! Thank you so much..


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Peg, So nice to see you. Happy you enjoyed. It's difficult to feel romantic when the snow is piled high, although i guess it would be nice to cuddle under the blankets, Hee.Thank you..


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Jodah, I agree. The first kiss is special. Thank you for reading and commenting...


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Genna. I love to write and read rictameter poetry. I think Docmo wrote the first one that inspired me to attempt to write this style. Thank you so much for kind words and sharing...Hugs..


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Ruchira, I have missed you. Happy to see you. Thank you for the beautiful comment.


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Just Ask Susan 2 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Ruby, Fantastic Rictameter!


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

MMMMWAH! Wet, messy, queazy, terrified? Hey - the truth's the truth..

But seriously..this was sweet and adorable - it definitely took me back..

His name was Ian...(mmmmmmm....lol)

Sorry i'm late, but - i've been in the DUNGEON - try to get mastered published. I swear, i need a TEAM of peeps! lol...(Or...a sugar daddy! haha) It was supposed to be done today, but guess what? It's not! Tomorrow - if it kills me! lol.

hugs and sharingxx


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Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

this was just great... loved it


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vocalcoach 2 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Oh Ruby, how I love your poem. It took me back to a time when I was very young, experimenting with kissing. My poor defenseless cousin helped me out.

You have such a gift. Thank you ~ Audrey


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Susan, so happy to see you. Thank you for a fantastic comment. I hope you are well and writing again....


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Lesley, I am always glad to see you, being late is not a crime, i know how busy you are. Happy it took you back to memories of lan...Wishing you much success with your book. Thank you for coming by and for sharing...Hugs..xx.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Frank, It's a pleasure to see you on my page. Thank you for a great comment..


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello vocalcoach, your comment made me laugh. I can relate about the cousin. Hee...Thank you so much for your complementary comment.


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mckbirdbks 2 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Hello Ruby, Your poetry is beautiful, what a fine sentiment you attend to here, both soft and sweet and tender. Happy Valentine's day. I know, I know, I'm late.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Mike, I forgive you. Hee..Soft, sweet and tender what more could i ask for? Thank you my friend. I'll be over for a bear claw and coffee soon.


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

A lovely, sweet poem for Valentine's Day.


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girishpuri 2 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Happy valentine day, friend


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Vellur, Thank you for the lovely, sweet comment...


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello girishpuri, Happy to see you again. Thank you my friend...


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

Oh I remember it well Ruby! lol! love the poem, it brought back memories!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Nell. Me too! Whoo Hoo..Thank you. Aren't memories wonderful? Cheers my friend..


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epbooks 2 years ago from Las Vegas, NV

How very sweet!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello epbooks, nice to see you again. Thank you for the sweet comment..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Sweet real sweet Love that song.


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MartieCoetser 2 years ago from South Africa

Oh, this is an awesome description of a first kiss, Ruby! I love the song 'Young Love'. Makes me so sad because this phase comes only once and so often, for too many, it gets spoiled by one or the other selfish, shallow idiot :)


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello Rasma, so happy you enjoyed. Thank you for a sweet comment.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hi Martie, ah young love, so innocent!, then comes reality, love hurts sometime. We've both been there, done that, now we roll with the flow. Hope you are feeling better my twin! Hugs and blessings..


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DDE 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Rictameter poetry for Valentine Day hmm very cuddly and sweet.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello DDE, nice to see you. Thank you for the cuddly and sweet comment. Cheers..


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Susan Recipes 2 years ago from India

Beautiful creation always exploring. Voted up.


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hi Susan, thank you for the beautiful creation comment...Cheers..


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joedolphin88 2 years ago from north miami FL

Short and sweet really nice poem


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rebeccamealey 2 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Cut little romantic diddy!


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello joedolphin. So sorry i missed your comment. Thank you for the sweet comment...


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always exploring 2 years ago from Southern Illinois Author

Hello rebeccamealey. Thank you for the romantic ditty comment, Cheers...

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    I am a writer of poetry and fiction. I especially love flash fiction. My name is Ruby, and I live in Southern Illinois. I am a retired R.N.


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