Rip- A Poem

Rip

I could feel your fingers gripping me,

Your hands pulling at me,

Engulfing me with your pain

Trying to pull me a part ever so slowly

Like ripping petals off of a flower.

Rip. Rip. Rip.

I could hear the voices again

Pulling me into their mesmerizing evilness

Trying again to make me drift away.

But I've got news, I'm here to stay.


As the sun rises I grow again

Standing even stronger

A warrior fighting against you,

You have no chance to win.

I gather my fellow army,

Those who know your pain, your anger,

Your insanity.

Oh dear mental illness

We will fight each day, never giving up

Until you are gone.

Rip. Rip. Rip.

It is now your turn.

Tell me, how does it feel?

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Comments 14 comments

jami l. pereira 5 years ago

First of all i love the ducky pic!:) always love a duck :) And second , this was a lovely message and could be very helpful to others going through the same thing. I voted up,awesome,useful and beautiful ! Very lovely read , have a wonderful day :)


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you. Though some of my poems are indeed full of sadness I really like to write poems to help others are going through similar things. Glad you enjoyed and thank you for reading.


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Shanaaya 5 years ago from Mauritius

Amazing!! it left me in deep thoughts.. :)

kip it up:)


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you and trust me I will keep it up. Thanks for reading :)


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

Good poem, I'm sure it will help others as well as you great lady. Up and awesome.


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jfay2011 5 years ago

I really like this one. I like the part about the petals ripping off the flower.


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Writer20, thank you once again for reading. And I do hope it does help others.

jfay2011, that part is actually my favorite part as well.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

wow. terrific. Voted way up


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Thank you PDX for reading once again. Glad you liked it.


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

yeah, it's great to overcome obstacles and let others stand mouth agape wondering how did you do it...


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

that it is, thank you for reading.


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

u keep writing good hubs, I'll keep reading


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Cresentmoon2007 5 years ago from Caledonia, MI Author

Well I shall do my best then


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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

that's all I ask

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