Ripples (tanka)

Upon a river

Coursing toward its destiny

There fell a flower

Which started endless ripples

Which are still felt in the rain

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Wow, this is stunningly beautiful and imagery too! Really nice one here, Mh!

Voted up +++ and sharing

Hugs, Faith Reaper

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MsDora 3 years ago from The Caribbean

Beautiful picture and verse. Have a great day!

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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

So that's why the rain smells like roses. Smiles. Beautifully done per usual.

Best Always,


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Very beautiful and excellent job here. Voted up

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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Very awesome my friend !

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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Beautiful indeed - love this so much...

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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

You have the gift Martin. Loved it....

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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

And the ripples go ever outwards. Beautiful.

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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Oh, so true. With the rain, will they never cease?

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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

Really amazing!

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