Rose in the Sun

Aching hearts cry silently

Your passion's poisoned wine

Pain enters to fill the void

As dreams die on the vine

Without love, the light of life

Watch your hearts rose turn black

Souls filled with internal strife

Painful memories attack

Shining jewels past presents dulled

Another lifetime unfullfilled

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Steven Holt 9 months ago

r.i.p chris love you so much


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Steven Holt 9 months ago

r.i.p chris love you so much


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Bambi L'Amour 2 years ago from Brighton, UK Author

Thank-you Mira :)


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Mira Fang 2 years ago from Canada

"As dreams die on the vine."

That's my favorite line yet. I'm glad you shared this piece.


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Bambi L'Amour 2 years ago from Brighton, UK Author

Thanks but I really shouldn't have posted this, reading it over it needs so much work.. unsure what to do from here, I can write the stuff but I can't read it!!


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jhamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

What a perfect ending in couplet. Thank you beautifully done. Jamie

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