Rotative personality - Our Voices Day 6

This dude knows how to rotate & Never stays in one position

Upside down and right side upwards

Your words are fornication

Calling the shots at each whisper

Longing for longevity to call you back

Getting rapped by timelessness itself

Illuminated heart with a scorching radiant mind

Hot to trot when pistols remain

Quick slithery trigger thinking you'll win each time

Slap shot to the chest

not wearing any heavy duty soldiers vest this time

Jumping from an armored vehicle

loaded with dummy munitions

to land somewhere in no mans land

Happy for no reason whatsoever

Smiling like a lucky beaver in heat

Floating across the ceiling as a starfish

While the water is Luke warm as the sky on a sunny day

Luke sky walking on them infamous clouds again

never to return to the ground due to gravity getting assassinated

heavy weighted boots needed to bring you back

Back to a empty drawn out reality drained since the lack of funds is constant

so where in the world is my Inspiration at

This poem should be such

Maybe Jack or Jill stolen it

as your shine got waxed like the moonshine

Downside up is the twist and play on terminology

None of it matters when your in heaven

loving to watch it all playback like a broken record

if you lived it right

So get inspired to live yours good tonight


Let's make cool music with your poetic creativity, why not!

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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

You always have such interesting wordplay...from guns and heat to water and floating. So much motion too.


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City Author

@MrsBrownsParlour

LOL, I figured why not throw all kinds of ideas into the twisted mix here with this freaky weird poem, why not right!

Thanks for having fun with me and my bugged out poetry. It was supposed to be inspirational, but I been writing these style poems so much I just got bored I guess, and decided to throw the most ludicrous twist I could ever throw up onto the screen.

I'm glad it portrayed a great deal of motion in the ocean to you :) I didn't read it after writing it, but now I'm laughing my ass off. LMFAO!


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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

You didn't read it right away? That's hilarious! I read mine like a thousand times before posting and then I still find things to fix after I actually see it out there.

Your spontaneous energy is in this one for sure...:-)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Poetry in perpetual motions. Enjoyed and passing this on.


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City Author

@MrsBrownsParlour, LOL yeah I was cruising at mock speed yesterday just typing up a storm. With the Our Voices series I designed it to be a free flowing creative writing expercise for anyone to jump into, but when I'm doing it its so fun I forget to look back, to look up for air sometimes even :)

Cool stuff indeed this writing of poetry online, its fantastic!


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City Author

@Gypsy Rose Lee, Thank you so much for sharing as you do quite often, yup its fun to play with words and thoughts like this. Its my fuel for poetic fusion of sorts, and helps me release all I been holding back for all these years as well. Super fun! :)


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

WOWIE, POWIE, ZOWIE - this definitely MOVED me!

This kid was no doubt a gymnast - he did pommel work - A-mazing! His body type belies his strength - which is formidable - trust me - i used to be a fairly high level gymnast and in my PRIME - could never do pommel!

Beautiful words to go with a beautiful video - i am gob-smacked, Mikey!

Thanks for this on a sunny, but still snowy - sunday morning!

moving it along, of course!


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City Author

Thanks a Billion @ImKarn23, hey there ya go again :)

I love your reactions I think you should get on Youtube and start creating Reaction News videos with me & my 60 year old Uncle Leslie.

We would take the Youtube cyber world by Storm as well besides this lunatic online world LOL.

Yep I love playing with videos such as that to help inspire me to write like a mad man as I always do, its so refreshing to get it all out & I know you know the feeling. TOYOTA!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Wow mike you are the best

At this.. love your videos love your poem. You are the man my friend. Many blessing

Deb


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CloudExplorer 3 years ago from New York City Author

@Deborah Brooks, Hey Debbie thanks for the cool comment, I do my very best to have fun on Hubpages as you know. I may not be the best at writing, but I try to be when it comes to having fun with words. That's all we can do if we're not right! :)

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