SKY Got STARLESS


Amazed, no star on sky today,

Not day, it’s a night tale,


When got all cloudy,

Lightning all over on nature’s scale.


Cold breeze and drop of rains,

Wondering around and moving to drains,


Watching and thinking again and again,

Do I am its subject now main,


It’s not a star hide,

It’s blackout on my saddy side,


It’s not the rain drain,

It’s my sorrows washing again,



I fear to hear this sound,

Tup-tip-top-toung-tow loud,


Closing my eyes feeling this rain,

I am amazed draining all pain,


Over and over falling careless,

Caring and loving me passing by mess,


How could I run, to remain in pain,

When someone is loving me again n again.


So high, intensified and heavily raining,


The night seems black but white in blessings,



My tear was about to wear,

The dress to office and get out,


But the rain made it blind and dear,

To remain in house, and hide about,


The roof top collected drops,

Together draining and shouting aloud,

Come oh! tear, to drain your drops,

Let me see, your reason to proud.


One minute I can cry to an hour,

How to compete this entire nightmare,

Resulting, a dry eye but still wet,

Realizing the flow of love I get.


Now I want to say thanks and smile,

To all these drops and their try,

I read out all message written inside,

Every drop crying for my paining side.


It rained till my pain drained

It washed out, all kit strained,


About to sleep, relaxing my mind,

But now, I realize strain in heart,

My pain veined, out and wiped,

But, now I found a tear of LOVE


With this tear, I want to live,

Long and crying understanding motive,


Of rain pouring love and bliss,

From eye of the one, behind all this.



I know my love, my reach, not your,

And so your love, is unreachable too,


Oh LOVE make me strong,

To know who is right and who is wrong.


I never found such assist,

From my relatives here,


I never found such LOVE bliss,

From a worldly dear.



Still Oh! GOD oh my Krishn,

You are hidden and still loving,


I long now for your view,

Your lovely face and grace within.

Comments 19 comments

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Sweets21 5 years ago

A very beautiful poem!! Voted up!!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks SWEETS........


Sueswan 5 years ago

Beautiful, heartfelt and touching.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Tried the same.....thanks sueswan....


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

Very moving...


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Reynold Jay 5 years ago from Saginaw, Michigan

I admit it--this one is over my head. Whether this is a great poem or not--I really don't know. I did like the photo of the rain on the fence and the others helped set up the concept for me. I'll need to read more of your HUBS... I can tell this is well thought out and must have taken a great deal of time to do this HUB.


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Your desperation and need causing the attraction of light is understood Monetcop by me...Beautifully Inspiring .;)


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

HEY REYNOLDS... WHERE HAVE U BEEN THESE DAYS...SEEN YOUR comment after a long time..i hope all is ok...what about ur new novel..

i know u can do any thing if u get an idea...its my pleasure to make an idea for u to work..

u are always welcome to read my hubs and i am sure u will get rich content out of it.

yes not only time and thought but also a lot of motivation from these comment we get here.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Mentalist acer....thanks so much....


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

The poetic lines in regular typeface get more intense in the boldface. Starless sky is beautiful metaphor, it is intense and powerful.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks vinaya...

all came on natural and practical vision happened all over


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epigramman 5 years ago

..love the title - it says everything ....and love the way you presented your words and I love your eyes - do they belong to you?

let me go out right now and check on my full moon over the lake and thank my lucky stars for connecting with such a great writer like you

lake erie time 1:43am ontario canada


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

epigramman...i think being a nice human is nore luckiest then having a good writer. And i have u so i am lucky than u.

thanks for ur sweetness pondering all over my garden


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nscnikhil 5 years ago

Great poem...loved every word of it.....


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, really lovely poem, cheers nell


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks nscnikhil.......


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

hi nell rose...thanks for cheers..i am very much honoured to have your comment in my hub


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dallas93444 5 years ago from Bakersfield, CA

Your inner light is showing... Flag up!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks Dallas.....i try to reflect the same what i got from God...reflection is a part only and a sun inside popping is very huge..rays may do the miracles and helps..entire sun can damage..so only rays...

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