SaDness

 SADDNESS

 

Saddness is like a deep sea,

Waves breaking inside me.

Solid perfuse tears I weep

No hands brushes them away

And,

Deep they seep.

I am alone,

With a lovely soul in my way

Over my fate I’ve no say

Darkness a veil upon my success

As it takes all my devotions away.

 

In Pauls I’m friendly,

While I’m desolate and vacantly alone.

 

My feelings die away

My emotions sedated,

I think,

I ponder

If God made us all the same,

then why is so unloved my Name??

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thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

Omg! I love this poem! It's beautifully...sad...Definitely feel the pain in your words. Thank you for such beautiful work! I'm very drawn to sadness...not because I enjoy it...well, I am fascinated on how others express our unwanted friend, "sadness". Thank you...


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thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

Oh and I love the picture!!! It's captivating...makes you take a second glance and feel the emotions without hearing any words...


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thanks thanglynn07 for your words, I really love to write poetry and read it because it takes to depth of things.. you also have good taste in such regard

Ya this picture is also Fine, I got it after hard time spent in searching the best image i could find to match my words


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thanglynn07 7 years ago from Long Beach, CA

You're very welcome! Just giving credit where it deserves! Job well done!


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thanks Again


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thanks Again


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probyte2u 7 years ago from Part Buntar, Malaysia

Good Poem,

Good story below to make remove sadness and not to be too happy. Cheers.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/This_too_shall_pass


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thanks I read it


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Kebennett1 7 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

Awesome poem. Very deep. you can really feel it!


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thanks kebennett1


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Cheeky Girl 7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Tender is the human heart. Very nice poetry. I like this.


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Oh thank U for liking it !!


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crazybeanrider 7 years ago from Washington MI

very sad poem, I completely understand it. Good work.


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thank U !!


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Lady_E 7 years ago from London, UK

.... and I hope you see the Sun shine soon.

What a beautiful but, sad poem.

Regards.


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nilum 7 years ago Author

Thank u Lady_E for liking


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deepanjana 6 years ago

Sweetest pleasure is perhaps pain .. thanks for such a wonderful hub


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nilum 6 years ago Author

:-) Feelings are always to be expressed


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nilum 6 years ago Author

:-) Feelings are always to be expressed

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