Sabrina and Abbie A Cats Poem

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Sabrina and Abbie A Cats Poem


She sits there looking at his lap wondering if she can just sit down.

Sabrina wonders if he notices her watching him.

Abbie is waiting to see, if she can jump in the middle of them.

Sabrina is waiting patiently.

Abbie is looking around to see if the coast is clear, and she can take the lead.

To pounce on his back, are to sit on his lap.

Sabrina is looking at the fish, to see which one she wants to eat.

She jumps high to make it to the top, to realize she has made a flop.

The aquarium is out of reach, the fish swim by smiling.

They sleep.

They play.

They eat.

Every day is the same.

Oh what a shame.

Can we just get something different in this dish?

How about some tuna or fish?

By Rhonda G. Waits 1/18/11

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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

We have two inherited indoor cats and four outside (trapped and neutered) feral cats. It's a cat circus.

Good work! Voted up and beautiful.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks WillStarr for your delightful comment. I just love cats. I would to see your cat circus. Thanks for dropping by my hubs.


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IN2Deep 5 years ago

So great> I love pets! I have a chocolate point siamese indoor cat who always is up to something.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks IN2Deep for your sweet comment. Your cat sounds like mine. They are always into something. Thanks for leaving a comment, it is most appreciated. Have a great day.


Eric Musch 5 years ago

Beautiful poem. Loved it. It describes them perfectly.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Eric for your comment. Thanks are stopping by and enjoying my poem.


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

Very nice. It is like you have entered the mind of a cat. Great job.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks KoffeeKlatch Gals for your delightful comment. I guess you could say I did enter the mind of my cats. I am glad you enjoyed it. As always thanks for stopping by.


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Seakay 5 years ago from Florida

Rhonda,

How delightful! You have captured the essence of life as a cat! They are delightful creatures to have around. They provide much company to me!


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi Rhonda thank you for sharing this very beautiful poem !


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Seakay for your delightful comment. I love cats as well. Thanks for dropping by and have a purrfect day.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks kashmir for your sweet comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. It is dedicated to all the cat lovers out there. Thanks for leaving a comment. Have a great day.


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katrinasui 5 years ago

Rhonda, it is a lovely poem.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks katrinasui for your lovely comment. Thanks for stopping by your comment, is most appreciated.


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Rosie2010 5 years ago from Toronto, Canada

Hiya my dear friend Rhonda, this poem is so cute. My kids' cat Toki is just so lovable and sociable.. he thinks he's a dog. lol Wonderful job.

Have a nice day,

Rosie


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Rosie thanks for your sweet comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. I have 2 of my poems posted here on you tube. Check them out. Let me know if you like them. She is his Queen and The River of life flows by. These are the only 2 I have posted. Thanks gf.

Sweet wishes Rhonda


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erthfrend 5 years ago from Florida

Aww, what a cute poem! And I love the picture, the cats look like they are in the shape of a heart! Thanks for sharing : )


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks erthfrend for your sweet comment. I am glad you enjoyed my cats poem. This is about my cats, they are so cute. Thanks for leaving such a sweet comment, it means a lot to me.


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prasetio30 5 years ago from malang-indonesia

This is so beautiful poem. I never disappointed every time I visit your hub. You made this so special. I give my thumbs up for you and I make it double with my vote. Cats is always cute and you have beautiful cat. I liked it. Thanks for writing this. God bless you.

Love and peace, Prasetio


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks prasetio30 You are so very sweet. I am glad you enjoyed it. I will soon have it up on you tube, if you would like to come back and check it out. I am a cat lover indeed. Thanks and please come back again.


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W. K. Hayes 5 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

Cats are a lot of fun to watch. Hang around cats long enough and you can almost tell what they're thinking. Great poem and great idea for a poem.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks W.K. for your delightful comment. I believe you are right. I know what my cats are thinking always. Abbie has laid claim to my extra office chair. If anyone sits in it she goes nuts. She starts meowing over and over and want stop, until somebody gets out of her chair. Thanks for the tip on using you tube also. I have 2 poems up now. Next will be this poem. Thanks for being a loyal friend. Have a great day.

Sweet wishes Rhonda


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, I love cats too, and I find they can be really funny, wonderful poem and you certainly know your cats! lol cheers nell


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Hi Nell thanks for wonderful comment. Yes I do know my cats. Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day.

Sweet wishes Rhonda


Eric JM 5 years ago

I really liked your poem. It was real good. You have quite a talent.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks EricJM for your comment. I am glad you liked my poem. Please drop by again sometimes. I suppose you are a cat lover.

Have a great day.


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

Howdy Rhonda - Reads a lot like a cat poem :) My wife had a cat here that lived to be older than rocks. Crazy critter used to eat the plastic ends off of my shoelaces. That was about the only thing that cat liked about me. (I did not remind her of shoelaces all that much, I suppose.)

Gus :-)))


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Gus for your comment. A cat is territorial like a woman. They can get into stuff and they usually will. Sometimes just to get your attention. The cat must have been trying to tell you something.LOL. Thanks for dropping by. Glad you liked the poem.

Have a nice day


shygirl2 5 years ago

Yup! You describe the life of a cat perfectly...the indoor ones, anyway. I have two kitties who do the same, without the acquarium though. Mine have two birds and a gerbil to watch. But, only when we're in the room with them! lol! : )


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks shygirl for your comment. I appreciate your comment. Cats are different that is for sure. They are always into something. I am glad all I have is an aquarium,for them to watch. Take care of those kitties.

Have a purrfect day.


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stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Lovely poem. Cats are so interesting. They always find a way to intrigue us. God Bless You Dear Heart.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks stars439 for your comment. Cats are very interesting. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Glad to see you are feeling much better now. Your comment is always appreciated. Thanks for dropping by today.

God Bless you always.


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Lucky Cats 5 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

YOUR KITTIES ARE MAKING A HEART!!

Very sweet and definitely true to life as I can attest being the human companion to my many kitties. Wonderful, magical creatures! Fun and imaginative, playful and happy poem!

I LOVE the video..I've never seen one like it before...putting your words to music w/the word movement in the background, too....beautiful.


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Rhonda Waits 5 years ago from The Emerald Coast Author

Thanks Luck Cats for your beautiful and sweet comment. Yes my cats are something else. Happy to meet a cat fan. I feel like I sometimes know what they are thinking. Thanks for enjoying my poem and the video. As always your comment is most appreciated.

Sweet wishes Rhonda

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