Sadness is

Sadness

Sadness is blue.

It souds like a trickle of water.

It feels like an aching all over.

It smells like a really fishy lake.

It tastes like a really salty sea.

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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Nice!


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luisj305 4 years ago from Florida

nice poem I would like to read one titled "Happiness"


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Kwett 4 years ago from West Peoria IL Author

Thanks for the great comments and luisj305 if something comes to mind I'll make a Happiness rhyme!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

Amazing Kwett! You really captured sadness. Voted it Up and beautiful.

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