Sanity The Poem


We are all broken bruised and
all so abused Obsessing
with those better times while
being stuck out side our minds.
Knowing where we were and remembering when.
We are all counting away these days
as if some thing, magical may come our ways.
But in this life there are no rainbow's
that follow to riches.
There is just sinister "plastic"
waiting to be wrapped around us, we need you...
to excite us.
The world is slowly falling down.
catch us, there are inevitable forces at hand.
Where they are there is no time, and they
are so exhausted,
with that all so old concept.
Love will not exist there, and there is
no depression, and all flowers are grey.
Should they not give us there opinions before
all quickly fade away.
Shouldn't they heal us with there compassion
and take it all way.
Where is all our amnesty, I say they've
taken it all away.

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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

Let,s hope something magical comes our way, Different, but makes one think.


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Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

Nice! One of my favorite quotes:

Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different results.

Albert Einstein

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mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

You're not such an Awful Poet at all! I've enjoyed these words. I think a lot of people will be able to relate to the images and concepts presented here. Thanks for sharing.

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Danny Lee Graham 6 years ago from Zephyr ,Texas , near Brownwood ,Texas

Truly not an awful Poet at all ,

maybe awe-full ,

or awe - filled ?

Think um up , write um out , Awe - Filled !

sorry , I like it !


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

I beg to differ sir as I found the content her to be magical on such an early morning jaunt about cyberspace.

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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Im very happy to see the new faces in the crowd.

Thank you very much everyone~

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MrDSpade2 6 years ago

Sanity poem indeed, well written and well done...

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Awful Poet 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000 Author

Merci Beaucoup ~

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