Save me!!


Save me!


What seems to have come so slowly now is a constant in my life.


It’s dark fingers crept into my heart and I can’t seem to shake it.


I don’t know what to feel anymore…anymore.


Since you’ve been gone my life is on the run.


Come back to me we used to be as one.


What am I gonna do with this sorrow, I’m going down…gonna hit the floor!


I still love you, come back I can’t seem to live without you.


Be in my life once again and I’ll never, never let you go!!


Oh I’m feelin so lonely, so, so lonely.


Is anyone gonna save me please, please, save me!


I need salvation oh I need salvation.


From this loneliness I need salvation!!


Oh I’m feelin so lonely, so, so lonely.


Is anyone gonna save me please, please, save me!




My broken heart can’t take this, oh no, not this!


I’m feeling so empty inside I need to escape it!


What’s wrong with my life, since you‘ve been gone I need to change it, need to change it!


Sunshine and smiles is what it used to be.


Your love wrapped around ooo it felt so, so sweet.


Please my baby love, I need you so!


I can’t control this sadness it keeps over flowing.


This pain from your loss is so overwhelming!


Why’d you leave me brokenhearted, it’s depressing!



Oh I’m feeling so lonely, so, so lonely.


Is anyone gonna save me please , please, save me!


I need salvation, oh I need salvation!


From this loneliness I need salvation!!


Oh I’m feelin so lonely, so, so lonely.


Is anyone gonna save me please, please, save me!




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b. Malin 5 years ago

What a Sad and Poignant Poem Sweets, as only a Broken Hearted Poet can Express...It's Beautiful.

I look forward to following your Hubs and a Big Thank You for following Me as well!


writer20 5 years ago

I hope this poem is not about you feeling so sad.

Your poem sadly beautiful. upup.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

@b.Malin Thank you so much!! I hope you like the rest of my hubs and no problem I'm honored to follow you!

@writer20 No I don't feel sad my mide just turns onto to sad side roads sometime when I'm writing! Thank you for your the comment and vote!


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

You have expressed sorrows of wounded heart beautifully.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Mind*

Your comment has delighted me Vinaya thank you!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

beautyfull...poem...for the same i wrote...SKY GOT STARLESS...must read..u will enjoy it too.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you and I will be sure to read it!!


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iloveglee83 5 years ago from Noblesville, IN

I loved it, very emotional, beautiful!


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you very much!!


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raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

happiness is always a choice...very soulful...reminds me of the time when i also want to reach out and be with someone...


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Heartbreaking...

I'm glad to read in the comments above that it isn't your heart that's breaking.

Beautiful poem.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Yes, raciniwa, happiness is a choice as long as you don't let the sadness beat you and sometimes it can...thank you for your comment!!!

Yes it is a sad tale just not a true one...at least not for me...thank for reading and leaving your comment!!!


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fratjoe18 5 years ago from Bluffton, SC

I really felt this with the sadness and the deep feelings of being lost and lonely, and wanting love, someone to come and hold you through such a dark time. I love the rose alone on the bench, In my head when I see this, I vision someone who has been hurt, because only a heartbroken person could leave behind a rose that was given to them. Wonderful Poem


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you fratjoe!!


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ROMANCER OF LIFE 5 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

Wow...Wow! Wow! Let me tell you... I felt your emotions and your words are expressed so well. You are very gifted in the writing department. Very sad and intense. It's sad... but beautifully written.

Be blessed...

Romancer


september girl 5 years ago

Heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing. : )


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

@Romancer...I'm happy to know you felt the emotions that I put forth in my poem and thank you for you wonderful comment!

@September girl...Thank you so much for reading!!


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

A sad poem indeed. But i want to tell you that your savior will soon arrive. Be strong!


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you Ubani! But I have to tell you that this poem is not about me but thank you for your wonderful comment.


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BethanyLynn211 5 years ago from Bangor, Pa

Beautifully tragic. Your emotions became my own with this poem. Voted beautiful


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

So heartbreaking. I wish you well. This can be a good song, too. :) Thanks for sharing.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

@Bethany Thank you very much for both your comment and vote!!

@Blaise Thank you and it had sort of started out that way...thanks for reading!!!


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ali-07 5 years ago from Port Arthur, Tx

Beautiful and heartbreaking


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much for reading and your commment!!!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Sweets,

I am her to save you

Please do not despair

I will write you some poetry

that will lift

your heart into the air

And when you do come down

I will be waiting there

to inspire you to

write your words

that both of us can share


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Cleaner, Thank you so much for your beautiful words and I will be delighted to have a poem writtin for me! But I must tell you that this poem is not about me, its just a road my mind travled down one day and my fingers could not be stopped lol.


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Kris Heeter 4 years ago from Indiana

Very beautifully expressed. I'm sure many can identify with the feeling expressed at some point in their lives!


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thank you Kris!! Its sad but yes most can identify with these feelings of lonelyness. Hopefully they all have found someone to save them though;)! Thank you for reading and leaving your comment!


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dmop 4 years ago from Cambridge City, IN

Great expression of the feelings of a broken heart. We all need to love and to be loved. Thanks for sharing, voted up and beautiful.


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Sweets21 4 years ago Author

Thanks for reading dmop and for your lovely comment!!


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LadyFiddler 2 years ago from Somewhere in the West

Hey sweets i hope someone saved you, broken hearts can be very heart rendering it is an awful feeling. I got my heart broken once in 2007 and i promise myself that no one is gonna break it again. & i mean it , that situation has made me so tough it just aint funny!!

Be strong all will be well & remember no gud thing will the Lord with hold ftom them that walketh uprightly.


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Sweets21 2 years ago Author

Thank you so much for your comment! I'm sorry that someone broke your heart, stay strong Lady Fiddler. I do have to tell you though that this poem isn't about me, it's just a sad road my mind traveled down.

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