Sea Change - 2012

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December 12, 2012


Endless waves of pain
Crash over me again
A sea of tears I cannot cry
storm-tossed and salted with lies
there is no safe haven
no guiding light
no God in heaven
to aid this night
foresaken and alone
I dash upon the reef
a crust of dead coral
all that remains of belief

© Lilliana Louise Delanor 2012

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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

A big hug to you....yeah I am following you and your amazing poem after got to know from Jackie Lynnley....Thank you for this wonderful piece of emotional one direct from heart. Take care and keep posting. Warm smiles all your way:-)

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thelyricwriter 3 years ago from West Virginia

Voted up, awesome, beautiful, shared on Facebook. Great poem Lilliana, you certainly have a gift and talent.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Very expressive.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Sea Change - 2012 awesome words hre and s o beautifully thought of.


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LadyFiddler 3 years ago from Somewhere in the West

nice poem but do not be dismayed we all feel like this sometimes alone, discourage etc even as a Christian but as the song writer says we should never be discourage have we trials and temptations take it to the LORD in prayer he comes in the darkest hour. Only believe all things are possible.


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MizBejabbers 3 years ago

How do you do it? This cuts right to the grain and one has to have been there to get the full impact of the words. It is so tragically beautiful. Voted you up++


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CraftytotheCore 3 years ago

What a beautiful poem to express how we all feel at times when things seem to hard to bear, as if we are going to sink. Amazingly, we stay afloat. Sometimes, it doesn't seem possible.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Intense and dramatic as to that pain that comes crushing down on us at times, tempting us to believe there is no one.


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Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

This was beautiful, so painful, whether physical pain or emotional, I am sure we can all sympathize, nell.


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Just beautiful. I took to your poetry as soon as I ran upon it. You say so much in such few words! ^


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

I know this feeling well. There is a cry that cannot be expressed.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Pretty poem. Keep believing.

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