Seasons of a Fourth Dimension

Winter scene
Winter scene
Snow carpets
Snow carpets
sign of Spring
sign of Spring
spring flowers
spring flowers
summer moon
summer moon
summer trip
summer trip
shade trees
shade trees
Fall
Fall

A Revealing






Icy blades of winter's death,

cuts across the lands.

with chilling breath, freezes all,

grips, like iron bands.






When Spring is born, new life comes,

buds of colors, laced.

spread as carpets, shades of greens,

old scenes are replaced.





Summer rolls in, like thunder,

trees to grace in shades.

warning sun to bathe the fields,

shadowing the glades.





Autumn calls, with moonlight nights.

As a cooling breeze,

changing leaves on all the trees,

bright colors, to please,





The four seasons of our lives,

All in one, the plan,

A fine life for all to thrive,

This we understand.





Dimensions of a grand kind,

each given this gift,

Precious memories of our minds,

As the winds, to lift.




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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Interesting write! You capture the feel of the seasons, but the first stanza is especially gripping


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Clever title....love the paintings....beautiful poetry! I call that a Trifecta! Nice job!


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Hi Whonu,

Such lovely haiku poetry depicting all the seasons so beautifully and serene. Your paintings and photos are amazing as always and fit perfectly together with your revealing words of each season. You always choose the most interesting titles for your hubs. Voted Way up.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Phyllis Doyle 4 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

What a delightful poem. Thank you for writing this, it is light and cheerful, yet deeply meaningful.


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Pennypines 4 years ago from Mariposa, California, U.S.A.

Charming and very appropriate


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thank you much,Pennypines, and glad you like it.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks Audrey, I am an appreciative of your works as well, and enjoy what you share.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks Bill, I always appreciate your comments and enjoy your works to the fullest.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks to Pennypines and Faith Reaper for the nice comments and well received. I enjoy your works and words of inspiration also.


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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Covers the seasons very well, and I agree with Audrey about the first stanza too.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks for your positive appraisal and well received comments,xstatic.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

I could not find this work of mine on my profile. This is the second one like his I've had.


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

I love the reference to the four seasons of our lives. Very thought provoking poem. Great job!


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States Author

Thanks bravewarrior, for your nice comments.

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