Secrets From The Swamp-A Poem

Magic of a Swamp

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Although you're a magical dwelling

with countless wonders to behold

Some only see with blinded eyes

never finding secret treasures you hold


Some consumed with a dark dampened world

discerning eyes see past this outer disguise

Your vast array of of world within world

remain forever absent from naïve eyes


Your majestic fortress of dead and alive

include bird, frog, insect, moss and tree

The list of blessings never cease to amaze

and you humbly offer it to us for free


The rhythmic sounds of croaking toads

the sad love song of the whippoorwill

The unique smells of your sanctuary

make me yearn to be part of you


The gentle breeze through my window

whispers softly, "believe in me"

Lightly caressing my cheek

like the comforting touch of a Mother's hand


Others may see you as just a swamp

but you are the heaven behind the house






Hatching Frogs in our Swamp

© 2011 Linda Rogers

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arthurchappell 5 years ago from Manchester, England

Picturesque capture o fthe feel of the swamp even without the illustration added - lovely poem


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breakfastpop 5 years ago

I feel like I am right there in the swamp because your words are so incredibly expressive. Voted up and beautiful.


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kashmir56 5 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi Minnetonka Twin thanks for sharing this enchanted poem, your words from this poem has painted a picture of the swamp and made me feel i was sitting right in the middle of it all.

Thumbs up !!!


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Emily40 5 years ago

Awwwww this is well written minne, very nice!

((HUGS))


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drbj 5 years ago from south Florida

A swamp to most people is not a beautiful place. You described a wetlands that is not only beautiful but enchanted. Thanks for the journey, Twin.


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AliciaC 5 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

I enjoyed reading your poem. It describes the secret magic of the swamp beautifully. You're lucky to have a place like this so close to your house.


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b. Malin 5 years ago

I have never been a swamp person...I picture SOMETHING rising out of it...But I did enjoy reading your Poem...Thanks for sharing.


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CMCastro 5 years ago from Baltimore,MD USA

I have been known to dwell on things that others don't see beauty in like a rock or a tree; you have made the connection in the natural habitat that makes it your paradise, and it is good to know you have a secret place to go.


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A.A. Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.


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LaurieDawn 5 years ago

MT, you have brought the swamp to life. I can almost hear the sounds that are the lullaby of a beautiful but yet mysterious place.

Wonderful!

Blessings and hugs,

Laurie


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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

never go into the bog, for no one knows what lurks in those waters. The scary tree monsters are everywhere.

Great write. God Bless


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epigramman 5 years ago

...now this is poetry ........so atmospheric are your words I felt like I was literally breathing and living inside this swamp .....but to tell you the truth I would prefer to live inside your head - because you are like a hero to me in so many ways - and a mentor too - I have read your comment to me at Fossil Lady's hub - and to tell you the truth I was quite moved and honored especially coming from someone as special as you!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thank you Arthur. I do love swamps because they don't show off like other beauties of nature. Their simple and magical and so alive.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thank you sooo much breakfastpop. What a nice comment to say you felt like you were there. Cool, that's what I want my poetry to do.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Hi Kashmir-So glad you enjoyed my magical swamp poem. I love hearing that the poem made you feel like you were there as that means I did what I set out to do. Make you join me in my love of the swamp and all the wonders it holds.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks so much Emily and hugs back to you. I really appreciate you coming by to read my poem.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Dear drbj-Oh how I love the word you chose to describe the swamp, "ENCHANTED." That is how I truly feel about swamps, especially the one behind my house. In the summer months I love going down to the edge of the swamp and watching and listening and smelling. It's amazing to me. Maybe it's because I grew up next to a HUGE swamp and we were always playing in and around it as kids.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Alicia-I am so glad you enjoyed my little journey into the muck-Hee Hee. I really appreciate your coming by to read my poetry.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Hi b.Malin-I had to laugh when I read your comment. You are right that these mysterious bodies of water can definitely make for a spooky setting in a horror movie. Thanks for coming by:)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

CMCastro-Glad to know I'm not alone in my tastes of quirky paradise get-a-ways. So, rocks and trees for you? HMMM-Totally kidding-I love both as well.


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

MT - Nifty poem because I smelled the place, and I saw the place, and I I heard the place. Lucky for me, I didn't even get a single wet toe out of the visit. Thanks for giving me such a nice one.

Gus :-)))


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Hi A.A. Zavala-I'm very glad you enjoyed and also glad to see you:)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

LaurieDawn-I am humbled by your comments. So glad you enjoyed the swamp voyage. Take Care my friend:)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Vietnam-Ever thought of going into show business.

You are so funny.

Tree monsters can't scare me away from my swampy paradise. Never, Never....


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Oh my my- My friend and mentor Epigramman. You found me out. You saw me gushing about you on Fossil Lady's hub. (she says blushing) What can I say-You are the bomb, a rock-star, a gentleman and my Muse.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...now you've got me blushing ..... lol lol lol


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

I got Colin blushing-Me likes that. lol


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Healing Touch 5 years ago from Minnetonka, MN

MT

The mighty swamp plays magic at night

Its charming games played by most of the creatures, Know this: their not a fright

The fog seeps out of the vortex you know

the magical fairies give the swamp its yellow glow

Next time you walk by a swamp you'll see, the magic it is and it's majesty.


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stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

Magnificent and beautiful poem. The beauty of the swamp. So gifted you are to see the magic within the waters of life. God Bless You Dear And Precious Heart.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Gus-You are too kind. Yae, you felt the magic of the swamp-lands. So glad you stayed dry during the visit but be careful of the tree monsters per vietmanvet. I love saying that.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Healing Touch- aka- sister-friend- ewwwww, love the images your poem incites. It makes me think we should run down to the swamp this cold wintery eve and see the goings on and/or shanannigans. Perhaps we will surprise the fairies that fly above, as they scatter their fairy dust on the creatures and plants below. Can I count on you for a midnight rendesvous?????


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Stars-I am so glad you came to read my poem about our swamp that I find fascinating. You are such a sweet and good man. Thanks for the nice compliments. God Bless you my friend:)


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

I love that swamp behind your house. It will move me daily to poetry. We all need a heaven to believe in. I love this poem, Minnetonka Twin, and I am so glad you’ve shared it with us. Take care!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks Martie for seeing the swamp as something beautiful. Glad It can inspire you to write some of your great poetry. Great to see you:)


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UlrikeGrace 5 years ago from Canada

Seeing things through the eyes of the creator can always turn a "swamp" into a "heaven". If we but turn our eyes to see the beauty of a thing for what it is not for what we expect...we can be truly amazed! Good writing... Ulrike Grace


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crazybeanrider 5 years ago from Washington MI

Lovely description of your swamp. On my walks I pass a swamp, and often wonder about it's wonders. Your poem describes the inner sanctuary of that hidden and not so scary place.


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

This is wonderful and I could sense the feeling of being in its midst, I could hear the sounds, breathe in the smells and experience the feeling of being in the heart of nature. A wonderful poem, loved it.


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Jane@CM 5 years ago

This is a magical poem.

I so miss my swamp in Minnesota - yes it breaded mosquitoes, but the other sounds that I listened to at night and in the morning were peaceful & relaxing.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

How eloquently put UlrikeGrace. Thanks for your kind words. I just love swamps, their so magical to me.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks crazybeanrider-I love how you called it "a sanctuary." That word totally fits how I see the swamp. Thanks for stopping:)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks so much acaetnna. Glad you were with me on the journey through the swamp. Your kind words about my poem mean a lot:)


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Hi Jane-I especially love the sound of the croaking frogs in spring. It relaxes me so much and makes my day:)


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ImChemist 5 years ago

You make me like swamp , thank you.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thank you so much lmChemist and you are very welcome. So nice to see a new hubber friend. Thanks:)


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Stan Fletcher 5 years ago from Nashville, TN

This was great. As was said often in the comments above, I felt like I was right in the middle of it....


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AskAshlie3433 5 years ago from WEST VIRGINIA

I love the poem! They are always awesome!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

That's what I like to hear Stan. Thanks for reading my poem.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks for the compliment AskAshlie-Much appreciated:)


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Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

The swamp certainly does hold many wonders...some of them can be a bit scary at times, still others are a thing of beauty to sit and behold. Thanks for doing a nice job of sharing the attributes of the swamp in verse. WB


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thank you so much Wayne. Wonders is a good description of the swamp because there are so many eco systems within it. Even Scary swamps with fog hanging overhead are still beautiful in their own way. Thanks for stopping by:)


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VividImage 5 years ago from Chandler, Arizona

The imagery you present is amazing. I read it several times, and each time heard something different. I could almost smell the dank scent as it wafts through your words. This reminds me of a saying I heard years ago..."One man's trash is another man's treasure". Thank you for sharing your treasure!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

VividImage-I love that, "one man's trash is another man's treasure." You said it perfectly. Thanks for your kind comments and I'm glad you were able to capture the essence of the swamp and enjoy it as I do. Great to see you here:) I am a big fan of yours.


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CheyenneAutumn 5 years ago

Beautiful - I often wonder if we all don't posses the soul of a swamp. Love the imagery here! Thank you for sharing this.. it shows a love you have of the nature there.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

I do so love where I live Cheyenne. We are surrounded by so many wonders of nature. The woods, the swamp and so much more. Thanks for stopping by:)


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AskAshlie3433 5 years ago from WEST VIRGINIA

I love this. I can't help but read it again. Best wishes. Hope all is well.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks a lot AskAshlie. I'm touched you like my poem. Have a great weekend:)


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BrendyMac 5 years ago

I enjoyed this poem very much...I will certainly be back for more!!!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thank you so much BrendyMac:) Oh how your profile picture makes me smile.


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gr82bme 5 years ago from USA

Very nice. We have a pond and a creek outside our house. I love to hear the peepers. Then I know spring is coming


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kittythedreamer 5 years ago from the Ether

voted up and beautiful from me. love your usage of words in this poem...swamps can sometimes be wonderfully magical places.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

gr82bme-What are peepers. Are they frogs or toads?? I love it in the spring when the croaking starts. It is so relaxing and peaceful to me.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks for hitting those buttons for my poem kitty. Glad you see the beauty and magic in the swamp.


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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

i live in louisiana so i know how beautiful a swamp can be. and how scary.


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota Author

Oh, I bet the swamps can be scary there. We don't have anything scary like your alligators or crocks. We just have the frogs, insects, weeds, ducks, etc...Thanks for reading my poem, I really appreciate it:)


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clivewilliams 23 months ago from Nibiru

nice poem


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Minnetonka Twin 23 months ago from Minnesota Author

Thanks much Clive. Happy New Year to you.

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