Secrets of life (Poem)

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Now that you have life.

Life

A consciousness of existence.

Existence

Living in a known world to man.

Man

An entity with flesh.

Flesh

A physical covering of the soul.

Soul

An immeasurable storage of intellect with a spirit.

Spirit

An indescribable energy like unto passion.

Passion

A one way traffic with unique strength.

Strength

The driver to an unstoppable Action.

Action

The revealer of secret never known.

Known

Conceal information now revealed.

Revealed

Unveiling the reason for one’s creation.

We are not just here for nothing, but to reveal the God in us

For ye are gods………

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abbaelijah 2 weeks ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks manatita44 !

Bless you brother !


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manatita44 19 months ago from london

Noble, exquisite and sensitive poem. Peace Bro.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

thanks for reading and for the sincere comment !

I appreciate that a lot.


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norabons 2 years ago from Ghana

I totally agree with your Dave, I was also taken aback with the last line. But honestly Abbaelijah, I like your hubs, you are a great writer. Kudos


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Pastor Paul Olabanji,

Thanks for the comment !


Pastor Paul Olabanji 3 years ago

One of the best i have ever read. Thoughtful. Provoking. Esoteric. Revealing. A pure river of profoundity. it's true, we are gods! Maybe the other man has not read it in the bible. You are on the way.


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elijagodbaby 4 years ago from Nigeria

An article about MAN!

Body,Soul and Spirit!


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abbaelijah 5 years ago from Nigeria Author

Sir have you FORGOTTEN that the Bible said "I have said, Ye are gods; and all of you are the Children of the most High." (Psalm 82:6)

Big thanks sir, for being the first to comment on his peom(hub)


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Dave Mathews 5 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

This Hub is beautifully written. Thank you! I do take offence though with the last line. I feel it inappropriate to refer to or address any person as "gods". No human can compare himself to "God" and even in poem I feel it wrong to do so but this is not just my opinion, I'm certain God probably doesn't like it either. I do not speak for God but His Commandments speak loud and clear.

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