See Me, Feel me, Hear me

See Me, Feel Me, Hear Me

If I stood in front of you, would you see me?

If I called out your name, would you hear me?

If I reached out and touched you, would you feel me?

If I were in the dark, would you be my light?

If I hit rock bottom, would you pick me up?

If I cried in pain, would you wipe away my tears?

If I gave you everything, would you love me?

You stand in front of me, and I do see you.

You call out my name, and I do hear you.

You reach out and touch me,and I do feel you.

You have cried in pain and I do wipe your tears away.

You have hit rock bottom, and I do pick you up.

You have been in the dark, and I was your light.

You haven't given me everything, and I do love you.

Look and see me, as I call your name.

 Feel my touch as I wipe away your tears.

Grab a hold of my hand as I pull you up.

 Let go of the dark and come to my light.

I give you my everything and know I love you and give it willingly.

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HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

Aww how sweet! :)

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

This is very great!! Thanks


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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you Hattie and Bella for reading and leaving a. Comment it means a lot to me. Blessings to you both

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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia

so beautiful, heartfelt and touching thanks for sharing it :)

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much for stopping by nighthag,your comments always make me feel good. You are great.

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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Very nicely done. Very emotional and human. I feel a need and desire for these things all the time.

Johnny Love 5 years ago

This is absolutely beautiful. You have such a gift with feelings and expression. love it. )o(

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you benwriting for reading and leaving a comment I appreciate it. You are talented

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Aww Johnny you just made me smile. Thank you fir reading it. And giving me courage to post it

Johnny Love 5 years ago

you are dear to my black heart. even if you don't see it

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you sweetie. I love hearing from you and our discussions blessings

Johnny Love 5 years ago

life is never what it seems i am finding out. so much pain i feel in the lies spoken within my heart.

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4elements 5 years ago Author

I know exactly what you mean

Johnny Love 5 years ago

i know. im sorry. i wish you didn't.

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Johnny don't apologize its all good

Johnny Love 5 years ago

well as you know, i am in a great deal of pain. i just wish it wasn't so for either of us

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4elements 5 years ago Author

I know Johnny I know. I'm here for ya

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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Being strong for the other person in our life is hard. But there are people who can carry the load, and they can be amazing, and they teach us as well. Interesting poem, I liked it. I will read more. Thank you.

Johnny Love 5 years ago

And I you. The pain will never truly subside im sure, but it is okay to feel today. even in tears one is alive.

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4elements 5 years ago Author

Thank you Astra your comment means a lot, please do read more and feel free to leave feedback, I read them all. Blessings

And Johnny I believe you are right the pain will probably not ever go away, but like you say it just proves we are alive, and strong. We are not given anything we can't handle. You have already proven being there for me, and it is a gift that i wil ltreasure always. Peace, love, and light, may it find us both.

Johnny Love 5 years ago

And you are here for me as well. Light, love to you Leslie.

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