Seeing The Who In You

When Your At Your Best

People find so many things to complain about

I just don't know why

People are basically good

We all have are bad days but they are only a few

Compared to so many days that are top notch

You have been a friend as long as I can remember

Seeing your face makes my day turn from grey to a flourescent beam

That shines so bright I swear It goes somewhere into outer space

I feel the comfort of closeness

The warmth followed by an extreme passion

My heart rate excellerates

My body knows

This is the feeling that is shared by so many people at one time or another

Some how forgotten as soon as it leaves

Tricking the brain to believe that this is not possible and it was a fluke

I assure you it wasn't and for once I want you to see what it feels like

Don't dismiss this overwhelming pleasure

For you have found the essence of life

The power of two and the encouragement to see anything through

Why do we have to justify everything

Why not accept the truth and enjoy that loving feeling

Let it stimulate all your senses and travel up and down your spine

Like a fine tuned piano delicately striking every key with perfect precision

Again and again to make wonderful sounds translating simultanously

From my body to yours

Filling every second with such ease and wonderful calmness

Taking every care in the world and bottling them up

To share it all in just one moment

Bouncing each thought off another like a pinball machine on the bonus round

The exenteded play that you were so focused and in touch to excel at every moment

What do you think about that ?

I am crazy for all the life that happens just like that

Continuous and unnoticable by others

Untracable and unforgetable

I now it has happened

I felt it then and I know it will return

Expectantly I wait

For all those feelings that heals all wounds

Mends all broken hearts

Gives life a deeper understanding

One sweetest as the best pie filling

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schoolmarm 5 years ago from Florida

Really beautiful! Thanks


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tmckim 5 years ago

Really liked your hub. I do think that Walden University is an excellent online school.


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Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

Love the last line. Nothing like making a comparison with good food.

Everything you write is a pleasur for me to read. Thank you again for this one.


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DREAM ON 5 years ago Author

Schoolmarm Every time I type Schoolmarm I want to say you are like Lucky Charms.I loved that cereal and I love your comments.I will try to keep you interested.Tmckim I will check it out.Have you taken classes their before?Good schools can uncrease your learning.Dim Flaxenwick Sometimes It takes me hours to write something I want to say.I promise myself something to eat when I finish not before.If I get snacks first then my mind will get lazy and I will never finish.I torture myself so I can bring out my best works.The food sometimes comes through my writings.My brain isn't always happy that my surprise after doesn't exsist.You all are great friends.

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