Senseless Senses (limerick)

My eyes saw girl winking at me

My feelings said just go and see

My nose was deceived

My taste buds were peeved

As my ears received the girl’s fee


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I guess her only interest was in the cash.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

LOL....that's the only way I could get a date in my early twenties! Just kidding!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Geez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "a kiss on the hand may be grand but it won't pay the rental" song by Marilyn Monroe.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago

Lol! This was hilarious! That fee was more expensive than a well earned AdSense penny. You are the king of these Limericks!


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Whoa, a risky meet up that was, and a hilarious one, MHatter. thanks for another great limerick!


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rcrumple 4 years ago from Kentucky

When heard the amount of her fee

checked and found my wallet empty

I smiled with grace

said to her face

I guess I'll spend night just with me!

Great job, Mh! Loved it!


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

LOL.... good one, MH! Always a laugh here. :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Funny, another good one..


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

Be careful when things are too easy, they usually come with a hefty price tag.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

lol..nothing's easy these days - Or free! too bad for him..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

happens all too often. Girl's gotta make a living. lol


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Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

Too expensive for you, huh? Go figure - a girl like that has to high-priced!

Good one.

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