And So The Flame Dance

I turn up the music
The music so slow
The music that my grandparent dance to
When their life still glow

I saw a candle light before me

It flickers…

I looked into it carefully
And I saw a picture

Again I glance to it
To make sure

And I did see a picture

A picture that I see
Was them in it
Dancing within the flame

To the music that I played


They spin to the air so high
And twirl unto the wind
It really amazed me to see

The image of my grandparent dancing





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Christopher Dapo 5 years ago from Havelock, NC

Very beautiful, chanroth!!


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Thank you Christ...:)


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ibbarkingmad 5 years ago from Utah

Very beautiful. Nothing like the visuals that a good poem gives!


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Jaspals 5 years ago from India / Australia

Really wonderful, Chanroth.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Thank you Ibbarkingmad and Jaspal! I'll make sure to check you out! :)


Malinda 5 years ago

Ahh chanroth, you finally tell the story. Wonderfully written darling! Mrs. Marshall would love to read this! *smile*


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Victoria Lynn 5 years ago from Arkansas, USA

Very nice! Where did you get the picture? You're right--the flame looks like two people dancing. Beautiful poem!


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi Victoria, thanks. I googled it. lol :)


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow Chanroth.. this is absolutley beautiful.. Your fingers are like magic.. Blessing

debbie


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Laurinzo Scott 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

I agree with Deborah... this is beautiful, and magical!!

Please keep writing chanroth

Laurinzo

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