Shaken

Stirred.

to find myself in this position.

underwhelmed

at the mere fact that i despise you.

no longer do i ache

no longer do i crave

for the lies you so desperately spewed

to get a mere reaction.

Nothing about you was real.

All of it.....smoke.

I'm impressed

the way you prodded

as if me squirming was just for you.

Nothing like a fool to deceive, is there?

Nothing like torture, i agree.

which is why after awhile...

our roles reversed.

Its how i brought you in.

I bated you with pitiable behavior

i bound you with feelings

compressed and captured what i craved

and walked away.

You thought i was your victim

ha ha

Considering the state your currently in...

i believe it to be quite the contrary.

Did i get distracted?

its possible.

But i kept my eye on the prize.

Just another for my collection.

Try not to worry about your bleeding heart.

I'm sure it will heal.

All i needed was to pierce through.

i claim the victor.

Good night, and lay you to rest.

Ive had my fill.

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kittythedreamer 5 years ago from the Ether

absolutely twisted and enchanting at the same time. love your poems. voted up and beautiful from me.:)


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Wow kitty, that was fast! thank you.


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

This is a most compelling poem...I agree with kitty...absolutely twisted and enchanting at the same time!

that is not easy to pull off, and you did it with great style! Made me break out in a sweat! Whew! Remind me not to mess with you! (smile) Excellent work!


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Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

This must surely have had the guy begging for mercy, but none shall be given..

Thrilling poem..Nothing compares to the pleasure of avenging the one who needs to be taught not to mess with anyone's feelings ever again..

Voted uo like 15 times ;)))


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

You guys are honestly too kind. Thank you tnderhrt, your comment made be blush, :) And as for you Cracknutcase....who said it was a guy? lol.


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

Very intense here and the music really added another layer. Devilishly dark. Yummy.


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Truckstop Sally 5 years ago

Woah! You mean business. What is the universal phrase for I give up?


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

As the first guy here, this could be anyone who messed with the author. They started the cold-hearted stuff and you finished it with enticement into your web and a venomous sting. Keep your back to the wall and your fangs sharpened.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

slingobay- actually, the author had conquest in mind, and got a little distracted in the process letting her feelings in. She recovered, though, and followed through. This person was chosen for destruction.

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