She Comes With Slippers on Her Feet, Dancing. Sonnet, to Victor Kwok. A Dedication


She comes with slippers on Her feet, dancing.

Pit a pat, tit, tat, diddle, riddle, tiddle Sat,

My Heart beats fire!

Her inner Sun burns my Shadows;

The darkness melts into a glorious rainbow,

Glittering in my Core.

Together we twirl and move vibrantly.

The golden splendour of Her gracefulness,

Fills my Essence with a paragon of Light,

Emanating the Love that sparkles.

An intra-arterial hue arises,

And my face becomes flushed.

The moonbeams gleam from Heaven,

Colouring the sweet-scented blossoms of my Soul.

-Manatita, The Lantern Carrier, Copyrighted, 22nd October, 2015.

~ Awakening The Inner Light ~



The flames of Surrender, illuminated my Heart with an ethereal glow, and I thus became drunk, in the bliss of infinity's wine. I danced with the joy of millennia, now anchored inside my sacred Temple. I bathed in an alcove of perennial sweetness, talking in Silence to my Soul

The beauty of the moon

Can you feel its dance?

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Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago from Toronto, Canada

Wow! Pit a pat... tit tat...! "...became drunk in the bliss of infinity's wine..." Whoa! These are not words bhaiya-ji. These are jewels! Splendid. No one can write as gracefully as this. Cheers!!

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Reynold Jay 15 months ago from Saginaw, Michigan

You are a whisperer of feathered words that caress the soul and dissipate as though it were a shadowy phantom of the darkness.... Well done.

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Jodah 15 months ago from Queensland Australia

Excellent poem manatita. Well done as always.

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pstraubie48 15 months ago from sunny Florida

"Coloring the sweet scented blossoms of my soul..." O, Manatita, this phrase does just that to my Soul. Choosing just the perfect phrase makes a passage one I wish to read and reread.

This is sublime.

Angels are once again bringing even more blossoms your way ps

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author

Dear All, Surabhi, Reynold, Jodah, Patricia.

Everyone of you are so nice to me, some expressing their feelings in poetic forms which are lofty and sublime. I kow-tow or pranam to you all on this beautiful morning here in London, UK.

All praise to the One within. Peace.

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billybuc 15 months ago from Olympia, WA

Wonderful dedication for one of the most creative writers on HubPages. For those reading this, you really must read Victor's works. Bravo!

Well done, Manatita...blessings always

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Nellieanna 15 months ago from TEXAS

Your work just gives me 'goosebumps', Manatita. It's the essence of poetry and music. I can't choose a favorite line here. All of it is scintillating -- like the moonlight itself!

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author

Well Hello, my Dear Nellieanna. How are you? I sent you a most important e-mail. Did you get it?

Your words, as always, I might add, are simply awesome, and I bow to you with much Love and Gratitude, for gracing my page. Praise be!

Bill, Yes, a truly great man and a wonderful human being. Like you said bro, we hang with the right crowd. Thank you for visiting my Hub.

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bravewarrior 15 months ago from Central Florida

Manatita, I think this is your most brilliant piece to date. Turning darkness into the various forms of light from within the Soul is what we should all know. We have the power if only we are willing to see and let it in.

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CrisSp 15 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

What a great write dedicated to V. W.! He's one creative soul out there and very original.

Love the way you show appreciation towards our fellow hubbers. Ahh, the power of words!

Love from the sky~

P.S. Rumi's always enjoyable.

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author


Don't say that, as I'll ask you to read them all. He he. More than 200 or so. Some you've never seen.

Yes, Light must descend into darkness. Only then can it transform and illumine darkness. - Sri Chinmoy, in the play on the life of Christ called The Son. We are all Gods, but you know this, I know.


I tend to think of you on high and send you loving thoughts. Hope all is well, and I still look to my vacation in your peaceful abode. He he:) Peace.

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BlossomSB 15 months ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely poem - as always your words are so evocative.

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author

Thank you so much, Bronwen. A Joyful weekend to you. Much Love.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 15 months ago from Riga, Latvia

Another wonderful tribute with lots to enjoy poetically, picturesquely and musically.

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author

Poetically and musically yes. By the way, I did about three of these poems at Poetry Café 27th October, evening. It is 0037 hrs now on the 28th. Much thanks.

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word55 15 months ago from Chicago

What a consistent joy in reading this sonnet. This one took me on a natural high. How super it is. Great work manatita!

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manatita44 15 months ago from london Author

Thank you so much, Bro.

Glad you liked it. Have a great day today!

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aviannovice 14 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Nature has an infinite rhythm all its own...

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manatita44 14 months ago from london Author

Yes, Deb, I agree. In Germany. Will catch up soon.

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