She Doesn't Know She's Beautiful

She doesn't know she's beautiful
It's in the way she walks, she talks
The way she moves when she thinks no one is looking
The way she tilts her head when she laughs
She doesn't know she's beautiful

But this beauty isn't just about physical appearance
It's about her soul
She has such a gentle heart
Caring for everyone around her
And this is what creates that beauty

She doesn't know she's beautiful
And I'm not the only one who sees
There are few among us who recognize it
Staring amazed as she passes
Not knowing what makes us stare

Beautiful Girl
Beautiful Girl | Source

She's an amazing girl
With a heart more pure than you can know
But it's difficult when all you see is the outside shell
Hiding nearly everything she is
Covering up the beauty

You're Beautiful!!!
I want to scream, to shout
To make her understand
But she doesn't know she's beautiful
She doesn't know she's wonderful

She thinks beauty lies in clothing, makeup, jewelry
She thinks it lies in her appearance
She doesn't realize how wrong she is
She doesn't realize that true beauty
Comes from within

Source

She doesn't know she's beautiful
She doesn't know that some would give the world
To see her smile just for them
To see her open up and let the beauty free
To see her comfortable with all that she is

Wait for the one who can see you for that beauty
Wait for the one who can see past the mask
Past the clothing, and makeup, and stuff
That fill up your life
And fill up your heart

Because no matter what
You're beautiful
I mean it with all my heart
You're more beautiful than you imagine
And knowing it's the hardest part

Beautiful Girl
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© 2010 Chloe Davis Smith

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Comments 45 comments

Bory 6 years ago

This is a very sweet poem. You are very fortunate.


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

This is a beautifully intimate poem and I enjoyed the sentiment...kindly yours nochance


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Dave Mathews 6 years ago from NORTH YORK,ONTARIO,CANADA

Thank you for this beautiful poem.


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billyaustindillon 6 years ago

From the heart and soul - beautiful indeed :)


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raphael12345 6 years ago

a true work of art


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epigramman 6 years ago

...but I do!!!


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epigramman 6 years ago

..and if beauty is your main objective in writing then you have certainly achieved your goal!

This is a gift as a writer who have so generously shared with us - and that in itself is a beautiful thing!


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nochance 6 years ago from Duluth, MN Author

Thank you everyone. I'm glad you liked it.


dracaslair 6 years ago

this is a true poem thou.some women don't think they are buetifull


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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

indeed I agree 100%!...great I've found the real beauty thru these words! thank you very much ma'am! ^.^...


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ezhuthukari 6 years ago from Kerala

So true! Nice poem:-)


james jenkins jr 6 years ago from deep in thought

I'd have to say this hub is beautiful.


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lifegate 6 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

You did an excellent job of describing your thoughts. That last quote really sums it up. Thanks!


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Danny Lee Graham 6 years ago from Zephyr ,Texas , near Brownwood ,Texas

The most beautiful poem I have read in quite some time !

I am a simple man I think , plain and even homely ( with a face for radio ), you even made me feel better about me , thank you.


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Hi nochance. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It's very good.

Michael.


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simone93 5 years ago

Love this poem....I needed it today


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Richard83 5 years ago from West Virginia

Great poetry. As a poet myself, I can see and hear the words clearly. A very unique writing you have here. You have a gift and a kind heart, which is what I take out of the words that you have written. Truly beautiful, inside to out. Great piece.


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Sweets21 5 years ago

This is such a wonerfully BEAUTIFUL poem!!! A lot of people could learn something from this...I bow to you...lovely work of art!


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urgurl_bri 4 years ago from Holland, MI

Very nice poem. This reminded me of the song "She Don't Know She's Beautiful" by Sammy Kershaw. It's country, don't know if you've heard of it or not but it's a good song about the same thing you're talking about.

This is the chorus:

She don't know she's beautiful (never crossed her mind)

She don't know she's beautiful (no she's not that kind)

She don't know she's beautiful

Though time and time I've told her so


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Jimmac1959 4 years ago from Levittown, Pennsylvania

i really loved that !!!!!!!!


Muveri 4 years ago

Its beautiful,I agree that beauty comes from within, if only everybody saw it that way.


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michememe 4 years ago

I really and I do mean really love this poem.


Julia 4 years ago

I bookmarked this on my iPhone. I love this. Every time I get upset I refer to this, beauty does come from within.


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nochance 4 years ago from Duluth, MN Author

Thanks Julia. I'm really glad to hear that. Glad you liked the poem. :)


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Lisawilliamsj 4 years ago

This is such an awesome poem. Your words are truly beautiful! I voted up.


Pushpa 4 years ago

It is a wonderful poem wen people believe this they wil becom an orginal human being


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smga22 4 years ago from Dhaka, Bangladesh

Beautiful Hub. Looking forward to get more from you.


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MsDora 4 years ago from The Caribbean

I bet you're beautiful too, nochance. It takes beauty of soul to recognize beauty in someone else. Linking this to my list of favorites on "They're The Marrying Kind." Thanks for sharing.l


Goku 4 years ago

its wonderful poem .. just awesome


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nochance 4 years ago from Duluth, MN Author

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.


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Treasuresofheaven 4 years ago from Michigan

I like your quote, and so...."what if he calls you 'hot', 'pretty', and 'beautiful'? Nice poem!


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fjohn 4 years ago from india

this beautiful poem is beautifully written!!!! its just beautiful i said.


zoe 4 years ago

I don't like it I love it


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Mr Love Doctor 4 years ago from Puerto Rico

Gosh, what a lovely poem. Could I quote at least part of it in my novel "Burnt Sienna?" It's about a lady who was burned by her ex and then learns to love again when she meets a man on a tropical island. You can check it out on my list of Hubs to get a feel for it before you give me your answer. But I think you will see it's perfect.


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nochance 4 years ago from Duluth, MN Author

Sure you can quote it. I feel honored. I just ask that you make sure to attribute it to me.


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Mike Robbers 4 years ago from London

Nice poem :) Your repeated verse is a good touch. Great sentiment.


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hi friend 4 years ago from India

Very nice poem


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James-wolve 4 years ago from Morocco

Very beautiful piece of writing.Everything God created by saying:Be ,and then be it.But man was created directly by God s hand,which means he is the most beautiful creature and it s an honor for us to be special and loved so much by God.So,that Girl is beautiful by nature and her characters makes her looking more beautiful.The real beauty is the only the skin deep.I voted up.


Roven 4 years ago

I have a beautiful daughter..But I always remind her you beauty is complete when you are beautiful from within..She would say ok mum I know ok.


Sreejith V 4 years ago

beautiful poem


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kathryn1000 3 years ago from London

A beautiful poem


parashuram pawar 3 years ago

its really nice poem..


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simone93 3 years ago

Beautiful Thank you for sharing


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Donna Willoughby 3 weeks ago

I love this poem. It touches the heart because I believe everyone knows or is the girl who doesn't really know she is beautiful.


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Nurtjahja 3 weeks ago from Malang

Nice

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    Chloe has a Bachelors degree in Creative Writing. Her favorite genre is teen fiction and she hopes to one day write a best-selling novel.



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