She Lies In Pain

Tears caress her cheek
Chest tighten…
Heart aching…
Body shaking…
Life breaking…
Feeling tremble
She falls…
Into the darkness again…

She’s hitting her fist on the floor
Completely drowning
In her own pain…

Asking what have she done…
Continue she complains…

No answer….
Alone…
Just shadow and reflection
The picture she saw was her own…

She study herself as she look
And what she saw was weakness…
As she died alone…

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feenix 5 years ago

chanroth,

Wow! You are very deep thinker, aren't you. I really loved this work. It's haunting.


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CMerritt 5 years ago from Pendleton, Indiana

I feel like kicking my dog!!!

Just jokin, that is pretty intense and very deep...I too loved this.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hello Feenix Thank you! :) I believe I am a deep thinker since a lot of people tell me that. ^_^

Hi CMerritt- thank you...^_^


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Wow, I hope this is just poetry. Very deep and beautiful!!


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA Author

Hi always exploring, these were the broken feeling I felt last night...so I express it in poetry. Thanks. :)

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